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A Gloomy Ember

plain quartet Looking for a tree. a dark spark golden wing our gable roof had passed us. the sky seems gloomy.

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Date: 1/3/2022 11:00:00 AM
Well done my friend. I could never master this form. Nice imag3ery here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/3/2022 8:11:00 AM
Nice new poetic form to read...Delice
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Date: 1/2/2022 7:52:00 PM
Shadorma.... the very name is new to me....So nice to learn new poetic forms from people like you. Thank you for sharing !
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Date: 1/2/2022 11:45:00 AM
Very pleasing, vivid imagery. So nicely done! Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 1/2/2022 1:24:00 AM
I read your Shadorma earlier. You are very good at such poetic form. Well done. HNY Victor
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