A Gloomy Ember

plain quartet Looking for a tree. a dark spark golden wing our gable roof had passed us. the sky seems gloomy.
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January 3, 2022 at 11:00 AM
Well done my friend. I could never master this form. Nice imag3ery here. God Bless, JB
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January 3, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Nice new poetic form to read...Delice
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January 2, 2022 at 7:52 PM
Shadorma.... the very name is new to me....So nice to learn new poetic forms from people like you. Thank you for sharing !
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January 2, 2022 at 11:45 AM
Very pleasing, vivid imagery. So nicely done! Blessings, Evelyn
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January 2, 2022 at 1:24 AM
I read your Shadorma earlier. You are very good at such poetic form. Well done. HNY Victor
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