A Glimpse of Spring

On a dreary day, the sky hangs, like layers of grey cotton wool As I am curled up warm and toasty next to a roaring fire Across the armrest, my old throw casually lays Favorite magazines leisurely tossed upon the floor I am now restless; too cold for a walk and feeling melancholy I proffer distant stares through wide expanse of window Slipping into a welcome daydream, my coffee mug in my hand Imaginings take forms as I look past the frosty panes Like magic, I deeply inhale streams of moist, clean, fresh air As warm, mellow sunshine slowly invades the gloom I see the brave rose bush awakening, clad in young leaves of green Her precious, new buds peering from sockets upon trimmed branches There goes a busy hummingbird collecting nectar as she sings And in my mind at that moment, in pure delight, I glimpse, spring! ~*~
Note: For Francine Roberts's, "Bring On Spring" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/12/2011 10:21:00 AM
A beautifully crafted poem for the contest. Even though it is unrhymed it reads as as though it is. Very nice. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/7/2011 7:54:00 AM
My best wishes for the contest, Audrey! Can see spring coming in when reading your lines. For us here we still have winter!!! Love, Gert
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Date: 1/6/2011 5:36:00 PM
it doesn't show as having been entered , please re-enter Audrey
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Date: 1/6/2011 2:54:00 PM
Smile ~ Behold "Your Radiance" gracing its sweetly framed picture dipped in the oils of such honey laced light; "'Yourself' &, A Fave" ~ I hope that "Your Brightness" is doing well & that the glowing fires of precious life are kindling unto, "Your Beautiful Hearts Smile" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day My Dear, Beyond The Frosted Window Paynes Unto, 'The Sunshine of Beautiful Love;'" Bye My Dear!:) ~
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Date: 1/6/2011 2:43:00 PM
Smile ~ Ahhh, allow myself to breathe in the fresh airs fragrance of this absolutely "Lovely Painting In Soft Pastels of Beauty 'My Dear, Priceless & Precious Audrey Carey!!!'" ~ What a wonderful image "Your Beauty" has Sooo splendidly brushed upon this colourful canvas &, the one thing perhaps that might make its shades of vibrant hues even more so would be, being allowed to step into its moment & thus ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 1/6/2011 12:02:00 PM
such remarkable metaphors glitening on lines like magical spring, audrey... veautiful! best of winning wishes in the contest! :) nette
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