A Glimpse of Spring

On a dreary day, the sky hangs, like layers of grey cotton wool As I am curled up warm and toasty next to a roaring fire Across the armrest, my old throw casually lays Favorite magazines leisurely tossed upon the floor I am now restless; too cold for a walk and feeling melancholy I proffer distant stares through wide expanse of window Slipping into a welcome daydream, my coffee mug in my hand Imaginings take forms as I look past the frosty panes Like magic, I deeply inhale streams of moist, clean, fresh air As warm, mellow sunshine slowly invades the gloom I see the brave rose bush awakening, clad in young leaves of green Her precious, new buds peering from sockets upon trimmed branches There goes a busy hummingbird collecting nectar as she sings And in my mind at that moment, in pure delight, I glimpse, spring! ~*~
Note: For Francine Roberts's, "Bring On Spring" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 10:21 AM
A beautifully crafted poem for the contest. Even though it is unrhymed it reads as as though it is. Very nice. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
Knop Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 7:54 AM
My best wishes for the contest, Audrey! Can see spring coming in when reading your lines. For us here we still have winter!!! Love, Gert
Roberts Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 5:36 PM
it doesn't show as having been entered , please re-enter Audrey
Rhinem Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 2:54 PM
Smile ~ Behold "Your Radiance" gracing its sweetly framed picture dipped in the oils of such honey laced light; "'Yourself' &, A Fave" ~ I hope that "Your Brightness" is doing well & that the glowing fires of precious life are kindling unto, "Your Beautiful Hearts Smile" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day My Dear, Beyond The Frosted Window Paynes Unto, 'The Sunshine of Beautiful Love;'" Bye My Dear!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Smile ~ Ahhh, allow myself to breathe in the fresh airs fragrance of this absolutely "Lovely Painting In Soft Pastels of Beauty 'My Dear, Priceless & Precious Audrey Carey!!!'" ~ What a wonderful image "Your Beauty" has Sooo splendidly brushed upon this colourful canvas &, the one thing perhaps that might make its shades of vibrant hues even more so would be, being allowed to step into its moment & thus ~ ....Cont:)
Onclaud Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 12:02 PM
such remarkable metaphors glitening on lines like magical spring, audrey... veautiful! best of winning wishes in the contest! :) nette
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