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A GLIMPSE OF PARADISE

Fazed, cold and feeble as someone about to die...not feeling the lulling breeze, I transcended in a soft sky of tranquility, where all you heard was calm and peace; two golden angels with shining wings lifted me up with a swift, whooshing thrust and brought me before the ivory throne of the glorious Christ and Holy Ghost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/30/2012 7:27:00 AM
andrew, that would be quite a thing to have this happen. I like this title of a glimpse of Paradise and how you really portrayed it so well. Congrats to you!
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Date: 3/27/2012 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/26/2012 7:50:00 PM
congrats Andrew on HM for this lovely depiction of the great beyond luv.. thankxx for your prayers and loving support.. I am on road to recovedry .. appreciate so very much ..
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Date: 3/26/2012 5:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/26/2012 3:04:00 PM
What an impressive entry into Heaven. Congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/26/2012 2:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andy. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/26/2012 12:44:00 PM
An extraordinary write, Andrew. If tranquility had been properly spelled, this poem would have placed higher. It's beautiful! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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