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A Glimpse of Love

Upon the sensual stage of my enchanted heart, cheerful feelings dance As a chance encounter of an alluring glance delights me in euphoric stance Quivering my emotions, hopelessly lost, in sublimity of your titillating eyes When ruby lips flash a tantalizing smile, revealing coyly as passions fantasize Unfurling on wings of the lilting winds, romantic dreams of a flying kiss Holding me captive, hypnotized by your appeal, indulgent in a pure bliss Blushed in heat of your burning flame, while you hear my echoes purr, Quickly then, whirling a turn, swiftly you disappear into the vanishing blur November 10, 2019 Placed 2nd: Give me 8 lines of rhyme poetry contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Placed 3rd: Strand select 4 contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/12/2020 9:36:00 AM

A very passionate write, Vijay. I enjoyed it :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/6/2020 1:55:00 PM

Congrats on your win Vijay..

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/6/2020 8:26:00 AM

Vijay congratulations on a top winner!;)

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/25/2019 12:21:00 PM

Well penned, Viijay. Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/14/2019 6:51:00 AM

very beautifully painted sometimes we need that glimpse that which helps us grow excellent pen i pray you have a blessed week

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2019 2:51:00 PM

Yes indeed! Much appreciate Liam--many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 11/14/2019 12:51:00 AM

"Holding me captive, hypnotized by your appeal, indulgent in a pure bliss"! The power of your feel wrapped into so impressive a poetry.. you genuinely pass on to your avid readers.. we just have to read and relish it.. Always a great pleasure to have wonderful moments in time embracing Poetry.. Congratulations, dear Vijay on your outshining win! So pleased to cherish in my fave list.. Warmest wishes and regards. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2019 2:50:00 PM

Always a joy to read your comments, Besma--much appreciate--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2019 3:41:00 PM

Congratulations, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/13/2019 4:26:00 PM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/13/2019 3:23:00 PM

You tell a nice tale of love in this work!Congratulations on winning! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/13/2019 4:25:00 PM

Much appreciate Matthew--many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/13/2019 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win with this one my friend :) hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/13/2019 4:25:00 PM

Appreciate the return visit--many thanks my friend.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 6:24:00 AM

Congrats on your podium finish, Vijay. Great imagery.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/13/2019 4:24:00 PM

Thank you Line--much appreciate.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/13/2019 4:52:00 AM

Vijay, congratulations on your podium placement with your beautifully written romantic poem!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/13/2019 4:24:00 PM

Thank you for holding the contests--much appreciate Tania--many thanks.

Maria Williams

Date: 11/13/2019 4:41:00 AM

Has the contest been drawn? I'm sure you are going to be up there Vijay with this delightful read. If theres ever been a poet who can pen a poem of love in any form, it would have to be you my friend. All the best....Maria Hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/13/2019 4:24:00 PM

Glad to read your comments and delighted by your visit my friend--much appreciate Maria--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/12/2019 4:50:00 PM

I am entranced, if I were a cat I'd be purring, nicely done Vij, winning wishes follow xo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/13/2019 4:23:00 PM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Judy Ball

Date: 11/12/2019 3:11:00 PM

Nicely done my friend. Beautiful description. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/13/2019 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Judy--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/12/2019 12:22:00 PM

A delightful poem dear friend - I have always said that your romantic poems are unique, each one like a new bud on a rose bush. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 2:12:00 PM

Hope you are enjoying your new home--much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks my friend.

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/12/2019 9:25:00 AM

A glimpse of a win, Vijay...well crafted my friend...^WW^ :o)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 11:02:00 AM

Much appreciate WW--thank you my friend.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/12/2019 8:30:00 AM

SO romantic and sexy--but she got away! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 11:02:00 AM

She sure did--much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/12/2019 4:46:00 AM

A look, a smile...both combine to offer an added heartbeat...a moment of captivation. Truly romantic, and the rhyming is also worthy of mention. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 6:43:00 AM

So kind of you Paul--much appreciate--many thanks. Regards!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/11/2019 11:36:00 AM

Wonderful write, my friend, you reminded me of my husband with the phrase “Flying kiss” he would do that when I told him I loved him from across the room and I accepted them all with cheerful heart. I also love the phrase, “Echoes purr” as it does now that he is gone. Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment it touched my heart this morning. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 6:42:00 AM

Joy to read your comments Eve--many thanks--much appreciate. I meant every word about your creativity.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/11/2019 10:25:00 AM

That mesmerizing glimpse is such a fragile moment frozen in one's mind for their lifetime. It is the jet fuel of passion, as is this poem, Vijay. Beautiful poetry! Love and joy forever.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 6:41:00 AM

A joy to read your complimentary feedback--much appreciate Freddie--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/11/2019 6:04:00 AM

A glimpse of love always has the power to set the heart aflame especially when it is expressed in such an inspiring way dearest, Vijay! Excellent writing!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 6:40:00 AM

So kind of you my friend..much appreciate--many thanks.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/11/2019 3:56:00 AM

Love it. A true inspiration. God bless you always, Gina

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 6:39:00 AM

Thank you Gina for your visit and kind remarks--much appreciate.

Hello There

Date: 11/11/2019 12:38:00 AM

Wow, Vijay, this is a passionate piece ~ a memory worth holding on to though only a glimpse ~ a beautiful vision you have shared :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 6:39:00 AM

So kind of you HT--much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/10/2019 8:27:00 PM

You create such a breathtaking mood, here within your words. This is beautiful, romantic and sensual, with the right amount of passion. "while you hear my echoes purr" Oh my!!! A playful thought indeed. Love it. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 6:38:00 AM

Thank you for the cheerful feedback--much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2019 7:50:00 PM

beautiful rhyming imagery, Vijay. This is a contest I need to get going on!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2019 6:37:00 AM

Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.