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A Glimpse of Love

Upon the sensual stage of my enchanted heart, cheerful feelings dance

As a chance encounter of an alluring glance delights me in euphoric stance

Quivering my emotions, hopelessly lost, in sublimity of your titillating eyes

When ruby lips flash a tantalizing smile, revealing coyly as passions fantasize

Unfurling on wings of the lilting winds, romantic dreams of a flying kiss

Holding me captive, hypnotized by your appeal, indulgent in a pure bliss

Blushed in heat of your burning flame, while you hear my echoes purr,

Quickly then, whirling a turn, swiftly you disappear into the vanishing blur

November 10, 2019
Placed 2nd: Give me 8 lines of rhyme poetry contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Placed 3rd: Strand select 4 contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree Date: 11/12/2020 9:36:00 AM A very passionate write, Vijay. I enjoyed it :) Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 1/6/2020 1:55:00 PM Congrats on your win Vijay.. Login to Reply

Brenda Chiri Date: 1/6/2020 8:26:00 AM Vijay congratulations on a top winner!;) Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 12/25/2019 12:21:00 PM Well penned, Viijay. Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020. Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 11/14/2019 6:51:00 AM very beautifully painted sometimes we need that glimpse that which helps us grow excellent pen i pray you have a blessed week Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/14/2019 2:51:00 PM Yes indeed! Much appreciate Liam--many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 11/14/2019 12:51:00 AM "Holding me captive, hypnotized by your appeal, indulgent in a pure bliss"! The power of your feel wrapped into so impressive a poetry.. you genuinely pass on to your avid readers.. we just have to read and relish it.. Always a great pleasure to have wonderful moments in time embracing Poetry.. Congratulations, dear Vijay on your outshining win! So pleased to cherish in my fave list.. Warmest wishes and regards. Blessings. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/14/2019 2:50:00 PM Always a joy to read your comments, Besma--much appreciate--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/13/2019 3:41:00 PM Congratulations, Vijay! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2019 4:26:00 PM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Matthew Anish Date: 11/13/2019 3:23:00 PM You tell a nice tale of love in this work!Congratulations on winning! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2019 4:25:00 PM Much appreciate Matthew--many thanks.

Sandra Adams Date: 11/13/2019 11:03:00 AM Congratulations on your top win with this one my friend :) hugs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2019 4:25:00 PM Appreciate the return visit--many thanks my friend.

Line Gauthier Date: 11/13/2019 6:24:00 AM Congrats on your podium finish, Vijay. Great imagery. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2019 4:24:00 PM Thank you Line--much appreciate.

Tania Kitchin Date: 11/13/2019 4:52:00 AM Vijay, congratulations on your podium placement with your beautifully written romantic poem! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2019 4:24:00 PM Thank you for holding the contests--much appreciate Tania--many thanks.

Maria Williams Date: 11/13/2019 4:41:00 AM Has the contest been drawn? I'm sure you are going to be up there Vijay with this delightful read. If theres ever been a poet who can pen a poem of love in any form, it would have to be you my friend. All the best....Maria Hugs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2019 4:24:00 PM Glad to read your comments and delighted by your visit my friend--much appreciate Maria--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 11/12/2019 4:50:00 PM I am entranced, if I were a cat I'd be purring, nicely done Vij, winning wishes follow xo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2019 4:23:00 PM Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Judy Ball Date: 11/12/2019 3:11:00 PM Nicely done my friend. Beautiful description. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2019 4:22:00 PM Thank you Judy--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 11/12/2019 12:22:00 PM A delightful poem dear friend - I have always said that your romantic poems are unique, each one like a new bud on a rose bush. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 2:12:00 PM Hope you are enjoying your new home--much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks my friend.

Winged Warrior Date: 11/12/2019 9:25:00 AM A glimpse of a win, Vijay...well crafted my friend...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 11:02:00 AM Much appreciate WW--thank you my friend.

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/12/2019 8:30:00 AM SO romantic and sexy--but she got away! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 11:02:00 AM She sure did--much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Paul Callus Date: 11/12/2019 4:46:00 AM A look, a smile...both combine to offer an added heartbeat...a moment of captivation. Truly romantic, and the rhyming is also worthy of mention. Regards // paul Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 6:43:00 AM So kind of you Paul--much appreciate--many thanks. Regards!

Eve Roper Date: 11/11/2019 11:36:00 AM Wonderful write, my friend, you reminded me of my husband with the phrase “Flying kiss” he would do that when I told him I loved him from across the room and I accepted them all with cheerful heart. I also love the phrase, “Echoes purr” as it does now that he is gone. Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment it touched my heart this morning. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 6:42:00 AM Joy to read your comments Eve--many thanks--much appreciate. I meant every word about your creativity.

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 11/11/2019 10:25:00 AM That mesmerizing glimpse is such a fragile moment frozen in one's mind for their lifetime. It is the jet fuel of passion, as is this poem, Vijay. Beautiful poetry! Love and joy forever. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 6:41:00 AM A joy to read your complimentary feedback--much appreciate Freddie--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/11/2019 6:04:00 AM A glimpse of love always has the power to set the heart aflame especially when it is expressed in such an inspiring way dearest, Vijay! Excellent writing! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 6:40:00 AM So kind of you my friend..much appreciate--many thanks.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 11/11/2019 3:56:00 AM Love it. A true inspiration. God bless you always, Gina Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 6:39:00 AM Thank you Gina for your visit and kind remarks--much appreciate.

Hello There Date: 11/11/2019 12:38:00 AM Wow, Vijay, this is a passionate piece ~ a memory worth holding on to though only a glimpse ~ a beautiful vision you have shared :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 6:39:00 AM So kind of you HT--much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 11/10/2019 8:27:00 PM You create such a breathtaking mood, here within your words. This is beautiful, romantic and sensual, with the right amount of passion. "while you hear my echoes purr" Oh my!!! A playful thought indeed. Love it. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 6:38:00 AM Thank you for the cheerful feedback--much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/10/2019 7:50:00 PM beautiful rhyming imagery, Vijay. This is a contest I need to get going on! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2019 6:37:00 AM Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

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