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A Glimpse of Eternity

A Glimpse of Eternity Seen through walled vines saved souls stand in the azure pool. The perpetual portal was open by the Omniscient One. Twilight glistening. No more of feeling life's pain.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/10/2020 11:23:00 PM

Janis, So creative in words and format! Congratulations!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/18/2018 2:37:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Sian - all the best to you!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/14/2018 12:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Sian. (Did you change your username?)

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/14/2018 1:03:00 PM

yes and thanks for the visit Agnes.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/18/2017 9:45:00 PM

A gem - congrats on your win, Janis.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2017 4:55:00 PM

Oh, I just had to come and see your outstanding second place win, Janis. It's beautiful. Congratulations.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/18/2017 1:01:00 PM

Congratulations Janis on your high placement with this exquisite poem. Beautiful poetic expression and alliteration.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/18/2017 8:32:00 AM

Oh, I love this, Janis. Deep and truthful thoughts expressed so well in this confining form. Congrats on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Gary Smith

Date: 10/18/2017 8:26:00 AM

Congrats Janis :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/25/2017 8:22:00 AM

Very nice ...

Janis Thompson
Date: 1/25/2017 6:32:00 PM

Thanks, Probir.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/25/2017 4:21:00 AM

Very beautiful fibonacci, Janis:) p.s - title should include theme word.

Janis Thompson
Date: 1/25/2017 6:34:00 PM

Could you soup mail me with more info. I'm missing something. Thanks.