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A Glance

Buds
Reaching
To the sun
With hopes blossoming
Spring




(Inspired by Brian Strand’s Lantern contest )

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Heidie Buys

January 20, 2009 at 12:06 PM

This is so very lovely and well written. Congratulations. Love Heidie

John Heck

January 18, 2009 at 9:07 AM

Dear Laura - Congratulations on your WIN in Brian's contest! Peace and hugs, J

Elaine George

January 17, 2009 at 4:45 PM

Hi Laura, This is a lovely lanterne. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. love and peace, Lainie

Constance La France

January 17, 2009 at 12:46 PM

I really like it.. congratulations on your win.

Sharon Winter

January 17, 2009 at 11:39 AM

So beautiful!!! Congratulations Laura on your win in Brian's contest! Love, Shar xoxo

Carrie Richards

January 17, 2009 at 6:24 AM

Such a lovely Lanterne, Laura! Congratulations on placing in Brian's contest!~ Carrie

Brian Strand

January 17, 2009 at 3:05 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Laura.My Sonnet contest is now open.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

January 14, 2009 at 11:52 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Laura.Rgds Brian

January 10, 2009 at 3:12 PM

What an uplifting poem. It has me smiling. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

John Rhinem

January 8, 2009 at 11:33 AM

Smile~I like this one too "Dear Gifted Laura!"~There is a tender brightness of hope shown within it~which shows a loveliness about your heart and soul~amid a pretty picture painted~Smile~time for one more dear lady~"Love, John!":)

Kristin Reynolds

January 7, 2009 at 5:17 AM

yay spring - I cannot wait! Well done, love, Kristin

Deirdre Omaidin

January 6, 2009 at 4:05 PM

Amazing how you captured Spring, the most hopefull time of the year, in 9 words. My wish is that we will will all bud and blossom. A lovely piece of work. P.S Thank you for comment on my High coo