A Girls Night Out

A girls night out,guys,can be quite a drag,
Going on a prom date,walk with a sleeping bag,
To show off your date,to boast and brag,
Sit patiently on the coach,like a good little lad,,,

A girls night out,can be quite a scare,
Searching the closet,for what cloths to wear,
Hours in front the mirror,fixing face and hair,
One smudge on her nails,she screams in fear,,,

A girls night out,can be so sweet,
Well put together,she looking cute,you looking neat,
Silky in your arms,and light on her feet,
Goodnight kiss on your cheek,races your heart beat,,,

A girls night out,doesn't always,ends in a bang,
When the girl you take out,dad,is the towns hangman,
Return the kiss on her cheek,a squeeze of her hand,
Goodnight Mr.Palmer,I brought her home before one,,,


               Darren Watson contest,,,,
               ,,,A Girls night Out,,,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Eslinger Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 5:40 AM
Sweet, fun. So that is a guy’s view!? Hmmmm.
Palmer Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 11:39 AM
lol, now you know
De Burca Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 2:02 PM
lol I enjoyed the father threat in your poem. Like the vision and comedy you use in your work well done.
Palmer Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 2:28 PM
Thank you
A   Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 6:31 PM
anytime
A   Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 3:00 PM
thank you for the reply..PD
Palmer Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 2:32 PM
you're welcome PD,,,
Gregory Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 6:44 AM
ha ha we fathers for you... guess to her its all fun...very funny piece
Palmer Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 6:49 AM
thanks Weston,you know us good Jamaican fathers,very protective when it comes to our girls
Jones Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Ahh...such a sweet poem....very well written..and congrats
Palmer Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 6:47 AM
thank you very much Donna,oxox
A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 9:35 AM
RICHARD, Congratulations, on your awesome winning poem... LUV -LINDA-
Palmer Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 6:46 AM
thanks much Linda,oxox
Sanderson Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 1:51 PM
Great write,,, Richie congrats on the win,,, xoxo baby,,,
Palmer Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 6:34 PM
thank you Carma,oxox
Mehta Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 12:48 AM
Interesting write, congrats on the win, richard
Palmer Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 11:15 AM
thanks Doc,you have some very interesting write on your page too,love your poetry
United Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Excellent poem Richard with a very clear message. good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xxx
Palmer Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 11:13 AM
thanks Jan,oxox Richard
Eastman Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 10:40 AM
A great poem for the contest... Sorry I haven't been around often lately... Have 2 kids just got home from college for the summer.
Palmer Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Thank you much Carol,hands full,with the joy of life,our children,full joy they will soon be grown and gone
Smith Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 8:18 PM
Richard, great poem!... Also glad I read it because I entered a poem in this contest..didn't realize this was supposed to be the subject..thought it was just a name given to the contest?!?!?... I am still trying to learn my way round here!!... Lol
Palmer Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 1:22 PM
thank you,best wishes in the contest,you will soon catch on,lol,welcome
Sietesantos Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 7:32 AM
Great write - bravo!
Palmer Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 9:42 AM
thanks much Pandita
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 7:53 AM
- A enjoyable evening for the girls - (It is the adults' responsibility to look after) - -Luck in contest, Richard ! - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Palmer Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 10:15 AM
oxox to you too Anne,happy you fulljoyed,have a wonderful day
Onclaud Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 7:25 AM
well, we gals want fun, and this surely is an enjoyable one, richard.. huggs
Palmer Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 10:09 AM
thank you Nette,happy you full joyed it,,,oxox
Harrell Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Are you talking about a girl's night out or a date night, lol? Nice write, Richard. Glad the old man didn't hang ya. And you were so well behaved.:) Cute. Or am I mistaken? haha
Palmer Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 7:14 PM
I am the old man,Mr Palmer,lol,and my daughter date was well behave,lol,thanks Toquen
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