A Girl With Backward Feet

A girl with backward feet wanted to show
That she could still keep up with the flow
She walked a bit
Then had a fit
Now she has even farther to go!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 10:36 PM
Lol! Giggles galore :) xomo!
Hoffman Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 9:40 PM
If only she had skipped the fit and kept walking a bit; very cute limerick Pat!~Che :)
Adams Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 10:23 PM
Ha! That's funny Cheryl. I think I like your comments almost as much as I like your poems!......Be happy.........Patrick
Michael Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 5:43 PM
So true...I like the way you put it together..." Backward feet" All the best Pat
Adams Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Thank you Arturo for commenting. I'm glad you liked it!........pat
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