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A Girl Named Autumn

Seasons change as do people... A girl named Autumn….enters quietly into the room…. Yet no one sees her there... She has a certain presence, still … and her perfume fills the air... Yet no one speaks to her… Her colors are not light, but bright… reds, yellows and orange, quite a sight… But even though , she's more than that… No one approaches, some don't seem to care... So she quietly leaves ...before the trees are bare...

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Date: 3/10/2016 11:48:00 PM
I'm in agree-ance with Andrea below me. This is a fine way of visualizing autumn. And cool wordplay with the "leaves" in the last line. In the City of Trees, autumn is quite glorious ... they say the redhead gene is dying out ... for Autumn's sake I hope they are dead wrong.
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Date: 10/23/2014 7:48:00 PM
what a wonderful personification. LOve this.
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Date: 10/23/2014 8:46:00 PM
Andrea...thank you for the lovely comment, glad you loved it..kj
Date: 9/29/2014 11:12:00 AM
extremely beautifully painted piece
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Date: 10/23/2014 8:58:00 PM
liam...what a nice thing to say...hopefully you look up some of my other writes...thank you for stopping by..kj

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