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A Girl In Toledo

A girl with excessive libido Was walking the streets of Toledo A sailor she found She said, "for a pound Please sir, can I see your torpedo?" A New Bawdy Or Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest placed 3rd Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Date wrote: 18th February 2022 https://www.howmanysyllables.com https://wikirhymer.com/

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/1/2022 10:31:00 PM

No you didn't! Oh, yes you DID!

Terry Miller
Date: 4/2/2022 6:04:00 AM

I did indeed!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/7/2022 4:43:00 PM

Terry, both bawdy and funny, congratulations on your winning placement!

Terry Miller
Date: 3/8/2022 3:02:00 AM

Thank you, Tania, for the kind comment placement and running the competition.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2022 11:09:00 AM

Awesomely Bawdy, Terry. I really like yours. Congrats for the win

Terry Miller
Date: 3/8/2022 3:03:00 AM

Thank you Andrea

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/6/2022 5:57:00 AM

Great question punch. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Terry Miller
Date: 3/8/2022 3:03:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comment

Jeff Kyser

Date: 2/18/2022 5:15:00 AM

Thanks, good for a chuckle! Or, for that last line: "Ahead full speed, ram the torpedo!" Or, "Tube one readied; where's the torpedo?" Or, ... Sorry, couldn't resist! :-)