Get Your Premium Membership

A Girl In Flames

She span as a girl in flames, Bared emotions there to see. A dance of love, and all it's games Her spirit fiery, bold, and free. She stamped her feet upon the floor A guitar strummed a bold refrain, The watching crowds, they cried for more She clapped her hands, then span again. Her dance, passion personified A wild look now upon her face. A sensual beat filled the air, Enough to make mans heart race. Then it stopped, she was all but spent Breathing hard, with sweated brow. She took the crowds loud applause, Beamed a smile, then took a bow. Entry for Poems that paint a picture 3 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One. 20/9/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/26/2017 7:54:00 PM
Congratulations Gary on your win with this excellently written and fiery poem!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Gary Smith
Date: 9/27/2017 5:35:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 9/26/2017 2:52:00 PM
Excellent Gary! Well written. Congratulations for your win :)
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Gary Smith
Date: 9/26/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)
Date: 9/26/2017 1:02:00 PM
Gary, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this rhyme poem!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Gary Smith
Date: 9/26/2017 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Broken wings :)
Date: 9/26/2017 8:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful creation. "Her dance, passion personified A wild look now upon her face. A sensual beat filled the air, Enough to make mans heart race."
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Gary Smith
Date: 9/26/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Robert :)
Date: 9/26/2017 7:24:00 AM
Great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Gary Smith
Date: 9/26/2017 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Silent One :)

Book: Shattered Sighs