Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

A Girl In Flames

She span as a girl in flames,
Bared emotions there to see.
A dance of love, and all it's games
Her spirit fiery, bold, and free. 

She stamped her feet upon the floor
A guitar strummed a bold refrain,
The watching crowds, they cried for more
She clapped her hands, then span again.

Her dance, passion personified
A wild look now upon her face.
A sensual beat filled the air,
Enough to make mans heart race.

Then it stopped, she was all but spent
Breathing hard, with sweated brow.
She took the crowds loud applause,
Beamed a smile, then took a bow.




Entry for Poems that paint a picture 3 - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Silent One.
20/9/2017

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Susan Ashley September 26, 2017 at 7:54 PM Congratulations Gary on your win with this excellently written and fiery poem! Gary Smith September 27, 2017 at 5:35 AM Thank you Susan :)

Heidi Sands September 26, 2017 at 2:52 PM Excellent Gary! Well written. Congratulations for your win :) Gary Smith September 26, 2017 at 3:00 PM Thank you Heidi :)

Constance La France September 26, 2017 at 1:02 PM Gary, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this rhyme poem! Gary Smith September 26, 2017 at 2:27 PM Thank you Broken wings :)

Robert Lindley September 26, 2017 at 8:53 AM Congrats on your win with this beautiful creation. "Her dance, passion personified A wild look now upon her face. A sensual beat filled the air, Enough to make mans heart race." Gary Smith September 26, 2017 at 9:00 AM Thank you Robert :)

Silent One September 26, 2017 at 7:24 AM Great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Gary Smith September 26, 2017 at 7:29 AM Thank you Silent One :)