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The adulterer and adulteress rode In a gilded carriage, while horses strode Many looked on with pride Others hated the ride Most of the world yawned in blasé mode
I had some thoughts when they said he was the leader of the Church Of England.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/11/2023 11:49:00 AM
I try not to judge, but your points are spot on...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/11/2023 1:04:00 PM
Frederic, Just facts that is all. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 5/10/2023 1:18:00 AM
God sees all and judgement will one say arrive.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/10/2023 5:05:00 AM
Yes, Victor, if a person doesn't repent then the judgement will happen and the end results won't be a good one. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara
Date: 5/9/2023 3:40:00 PM
I think many people see it this way.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/10/2023 5:04:00 AM
Kim, I guess everyone has a different opinion and I covered a few. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 5/9/2023 9:58:00 AM
You've captured the moment (hours) perfectly! Good job!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/9/2023 12:41:00 PM
Ann, I appreciate the kind review of my work. It was a grand day and into the night for them but at what cost monetarily, emotionally for others, the destruction of a home, hurt for people(his wife, sons, maybe her son and her ex), and a nation. Sara
Date: 5/8/2023 4:46:00 PM
Sara, this is a good one...well put, indeed!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/9/2023 4:20:00 AM
Thank you, David. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 5/8/2023 3:16:00 PM
Excellent limerick, Sara Is the gilded carriage a gilded cage? Take care, Shirley
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/9/2023 4:20:00 AM
Shirley, I would say that the carriage is somewhat of a gilded cage as well as the most expensive and unique ride that exists. Our Savior rode on a donkey which had never been ridden before and He was a man who had never ridden a horse before(that I know of). Sara

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