A Gift To the Ladies

Know a nice fellow his name is Tim Smith The rumour that he's female is truly a myth He's hearty and strong In Hollywood he belongs To young ladies of the Soup he's surely a gift © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:57 AM
Seems every Monday I'm late for the party...lol. Oh but you're crafty indeed...haha. I bet Tim is getting ready to take a swing at you now...:)
Nunez Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 7:17 AM
Managed to catch up with the tail end of it somehow...lol. Your wife threw you out and you're now living with a mouse! lol
Ellison Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 7:11 AM
YUP! Tim did and I re-took a swing... and he re-took a swing... and I re-took a swing... and... You missed the part! LOL Hugs, Jack xx
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 3:22 PM
I returned the favour "MR. SILLY" lol
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 4:25 PM
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 4:14 PM
Heading right over... I expect that you to treated me with honour and respect that I so richly deserve..............
Eastman Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 10:50 AM
You go Tim Smith... Now it's you're turn to write about Jack Elliott!
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 12:38 PM
I will.work on it Carol.....lol
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:12 AM
I truly expect some repercussions! LOL xxx
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Shock horror Tim is male - thanks for putting the record straight ! Seriously with 4 kids to keep him busy he only has time to dress up at the weekends:-) Hugs Jan xx
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:07 AM
If I was a lady and 30 years younger, I could go for him!!! LOL Huggs, Jack xxx
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Ha Tim is that boy...Love Jack>>>rajat
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 9:33 AM
LOL Charmaine tells me he has 4 kids... now that's a real man!!! Cheers, Jack
Chircop Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:21 AM
lol : )..Oh Tim a female? He does have four kids : )..A sweet limerick JJack..Very sweet..You lift our spirits : )
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:29 AM
Just having fun with one of my favourite Soupers!!! Loving hugs, Miss Malta xxx
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Lol...you are a riot Sir Jack....well if you would have seen the eye shadow and lip gloss my 5 year old put on me last night it might make you wonder : )......thank you my dear friend
Chircop Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:10 PM
: )
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:00 AM
My youngest is a she...lol...a7 and fav
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Perhaps your wee guy is trying to tell you something Ms. Tim!!! LOL
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