A Gift of Love

I bought my love a white chocolate rose
Filled with honey and strawberry cream
I placed it in the car to get a card
It melted in a chocolate stream

I bought a plant of beautiful bloom
Pink and red and white
But placed it in the hallway
Too drafty and so it died

I bought my love a golden heart
With citrine and sapphires 
A splendid work of art
Glittering strung with wires

But when I placed it on his neck
The chain was much too small
The wire snapped the catch broke
And the stones and heart did fall

And now I simply laughed and cried
And hugged my love so dear
Too late to get another gift
I hugged and loved him as I shed a tear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Godwin Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:39 AM
I was getting stressed from frustration on your behalf thou I realized you didn't want me, the reader, to do so - stress must be coming from me. This is lighthearted and playful with a moral at the end, it isn't the things, it is the intangible, the love. I love the delivery. Now, let me do something about my stress! Enjoyed this ... CayCay
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February 16, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Funny. Sorry. Sometimes I think when you think of pleasing other people you don’t always think of everything. I honestly get gifts for people and give them to them ASAP in fear of forgetting where I put them, or one of my parrots getting it or I have even thrown things out by mistake. Thank you
One Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Great storytelling Kelli..
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February 12, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Thank you SO. Happy Valentines Day.
Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 4:46 PM
I enjoyed reading this fun story..you gave the best gift in the end..very clever poem, Kelli. Well articulated!
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February 12, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Lol. Thank you Vijay. Happy Valentines DAY.
Talbot Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 3:25 PM
There is a moral in there somewhere, beautifully penned! Mick
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February 12, 2018 at 3:39 PM
Happy Valentines Day. Thank you Mick
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