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a gift from cyber space

to my cyber love whom i may never see who's words are my comfort who loves me with keys you who writes to my soul apart of my life i give control between us we share a box with words that instantly care's and feelings preserve we try to give some sorts of gifts but unlike other lovers we cannot kiss but give what i can to you this day to make you feel special in my special sort of way have you ever seen lovers look up in the night time sky and one pick out a star and say that's yours and mine of all the stars in heaven i've chosen the best one the star i chose for you is the star we call the sun of all the stars in heaven none compare to it's light it's beauty and majesty to everyones delight it warms and makes you happy and even makes you grow to say the least a lot of other things that you may not even know it will always be there tomarrow and tomarrow just a simple gift need never have to barrow so when morning comes and you see the dawns first light think of it as me sneaking in to your life (This is dedicated to the one I love.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/31/2011 8:40:00 AM
John this is an awesome romantic write. I know i will add it to one of my fav. writes. phyl
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:06:00 AM
Gosh I'm overwhelmed by this.. what a wonder love is, that it can produce such beauty in words... fantastic...Allie
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Date: 1/22/2011 10:04:00 PM
someone out there is feeling the love. T.S.
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:54:00 PM
Enjoyed your romantic work of art..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2011 9:20:00 AM
I was merely trying to fulfill the expectations of the contest. "Meeting Expectations." I was saying John's mother expected success and got it Sally's parents expected defeat and got it. Joyce
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:51:00 PM
lovely and thank you for the coment on my poem very thoughtful yes i know i am a first at this but i was taught to express myself in my poems not just make things up to what i have tried to do before it didnt work out at all lol but thanks and i love the poem :) with care Ashley C B
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Date: 1/21/2011 2:53:00 PM
WoW! WoW! what can i say.. Now I wish I was TRON~ j.k. loved it John.. Lucky cyber love.. sounds better than reality.. adding this this to my favorites.. I truly love the star that gives more light than.. any night light,, p.d.
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:46:00 PM
Have you found a new love in cyberspace, John? Someone who brings the light of the sun into your life? Such a lovely poem must have been inspired by deep devotion. I'm so happy you are making your way into someone's life. Love always, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:24:00 PM
Sounds like an incredible romance in cyber space John... amazing to have this luv connection foreveer...
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