A Gift From Cyber Space

to my cyber love
whom i may never see
who's words are my comfort
who loves me with keys
you who writes to my soul
apart of my life i give control
between us we share
a box with words
that instantly care's
and feelings preserve
we try to give
some sorts of gifts
but unlike other lovers
we cannot kiss
but give what i can 
to you this day
to make you feel special 
in my special sort of way
have you ever seen lovers 
look up in the night time sky
and one pick out a star
and say that's yours and mine
of all the stars in heaven
i've chosen the best one 
the star i chose for you
is the star we call the sun
of all the stars in heaven 
none compare to it's light
it's beauty and majesty
to everyones delight
it warms and makes you happy
and even makes you grow
to say the least a lot of other things 
that you may not even know
it will always be there
tomarrow and tomarrow
just a simple gift 
need never have to barrow
so when morning comes 
and you see the dawns first light
think of it as me
sneaking in to your life





(This is dedicated to the one I love.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/31/2011 8:40:00 AM
John this is an awesome romantic write. I know i will add it to one of my fav. writes. phyl
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:06:00 AM
Gosh I'm overwhelmed by this.. what a wonder love is, that it can produce such beauty in words... fantastic...Allie
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Date: 1/22/2011 10:04:00 PM
someone out there is feeling the love. T.S.
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:54:00 PM
Enjoyed your romantic work of art..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2011 9:20:00 AM
I was merely trying to fulfill the expectations of the contest. "Meeting Expectations." I was saying John's mother expected success and got it Sally's parents expected defeat and got it. Joyce
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:51:00 PM
lovely and thank you for the coment on my poem very thoughtful yes i know i am a first at this but i was taught to express myself in my poems not just make things up to what i have tried to do before it didnt work out at all lol but thanks and i love the poem :) with care Ashley C B
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Date: 1/21/2011 2:53:00 PM
WoW! WoW! what can i say.. Now I wish I was TRON~ j.k. loved it John.. Lucky cyber love.. sounds better than reality.. adding this this to my favorites.. I truly love the star that gives more light than.. any night light,, p.d.
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:46:00 PM
Have you found a new love in cyberspace, John? Someone who brings the light of the sun into your life? Such a lovely poem must have been inspired by deep devotion. I'm so happy you are making your way into someone's life. Love always, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:24:00 PM
Sounds like an incredible romance in cyber space John... amazing to have this luv connection foreveer...
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