A Giant Egg

a giant egg cracks
and a dinosaur hatches - -
pterodactyls swoop

for Susan’s contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Great creative work and winning number...Congrats..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 7:19 AM
Good one Jack! congrats on your win with this gem. BG
Williams Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 1:42 AM
Jack congrats on your win...David
Johnson Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations on your great haiku and win. Love, Joyce
Grisetti Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 1:54 PM
Congratulations on oyur winning poem.
Guzzi Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 1:48 PM
Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Thanks for your egg poem - YOU won a prize!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Brown Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Eggs" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Collins Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 9:27 AM
exactly how old are you? Great three lines. love, Kathy
Wesley Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 9:20 PM
That makes a few eyes pop. Wouldn't it be something if it could happen.
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 9:41 PM
Jack, you never cease to amaze me how you pull these shortie poems out of your hat for almost any contest. !!
Onclaud Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 2:34 PM
a startling ending and a greeat 'ku.. got your message re the change in etheree piece.... cool you, jack..:) huggs!
Song Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Poor baby dino!....Bad pterodactyl! Fun cartoon image in my childlike mind! Super duper entry, Jack! Love, Gwendolen
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 1:30 PM
This dinosaur is a winner for sure but death is imminent..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Sara
Brown Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 1:20 PM
A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry today Jack. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Aaaack! Oh poor dino baby!!! :( But yup I could so imagine this...thanks for your compliment in my limerick :D
Sivey Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 11:13 AM
Very clever write my friend, very clever! I really enjoyed this perfect entry into Susan's contest! Great Work!!
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June 8, 2012 at 10:52 AM
JACK, HA HA~ i bet that giant egg was in an eagles nest, and you got hit by an apple while sitting under a tree... kidding,,, good luck in the contest.. xox~pd
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