A Giant Egg

a giant egg cracks and a dinosaur hatches - - pterodactyls swoop for Susan’s contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2012 11:49:00 AM

Great creative work and winning number...Congrats..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/19/2012 7:19:00 AM

Good one Jack! congrats on your win with this gem. BG

David Williams

Date: 6/19/2012 1:42:00 AM

Jack congrats on your win...David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/18/2012 3:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your great haiku and win. Love, Joyce

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/18/2012 1:54:00 PM

Congratulations on oyur winning poem.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/18/2012 1:48:00 PM

Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2012 11:19:00 AM

Thanks for your egg poem - YOU won a prize!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/18/2012 11:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Eggs" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Kathryn Collins

Date: 6/17/2012 9:27:00 AM

exactly how old are you? Great three lines. love, Kathy

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/10/2012 9:20:00 PM

That makes a few eyes pop. Wouldn't it be something if it could happen.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2012 9:41:00 PM

Jack, you never cease to amaze me how you pull these shortie poems out of your hat for almost any contest. !!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/8/2012 2:34:00 PM

a startling ending and a greeat 'ku.. got your message re the change in etheree piece.... cool you, jack..:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/8/2012 2:26:00 PM

Poor baby dino!....Bad pterodactyl! Fun cartoon image in my childlike mind! Super duper entry, Jack! Love, Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2012 1:30:00 PM

This dinosaur is a winner for sure but death is imminent..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/8/2012 1:20:00 PM

A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry today Jack. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/8/2012 11:28:00 AM

Aaaack! Oh poor dino baby!!! :( But yup I could so imagine this...thanks for your compliment in my limerick :D

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/8/2012 11:13:00 AM

Very clever write my friend, very clever! I really enjoyed this perfect entry into Susan's contest! Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2012 10:52:00 AM

JACK, HA HA~ i bet that giant egg was in an eagles nest, and you got hit by an apple while sitting under a tree... kidding,,, good luck in the contest.. xox~pd