A Ghost Story

A Ghost Story


"Goodnight my dear", Mother said
As I lied upon the old bunk bed 
"Don't close the door"
I used to say, as she would turn to walk away

Once again she'd say "Good night"
And with one stroke, shut out the light
Night is what I’ve come to dread
So I'd slipped the covers, o'er my head

My brother, used to sleep with me
The upper bunk, is where he’d be
His mattress sagged, the bed would squeak 
He’d toss and turn, then fall asleep

But now he’s gone, they say he died
They would not say the reason why
Still late at night, the bed will squeak
When the mattress sags, I dare not sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations, my friend for your win in this contest! After reading this hair-raising piece, I will need to sleep with the lights on tonight for sure! Well done! Pandita
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 5:36 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Jerry. I think this is a fantastic ghost story.
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 8:07 AM
oh how hauntingly sad Jerry - many congrats Hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 2:35 AM
This reminded me of when I was a kid and being too afraid to sleep in my room! A great ghost story, Jerry! Congrats on your win!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 6:17 PM
excellent piece of writing jerry smiling i used to sleep the upper bunk myself
Gulley Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 7:41 PM
What a mastery of ghoulish tales, made the hair stand on my arms. Happy Halloween Jerry, thank you for the sad but scary tale....Sharon G
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 6:58 AM
Wow Jerry, what started off harmless ended up really creepy sad. Great Ghost story!
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 6:54 AM
- ..... Goosebumps ..... no wonder you do not sleep - well written Jerry ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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