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A Gentle Prevailing Wind

Waiting for a true friend anyone it can be warmth of morning's first cup of tea in me and a smile that will brighten your day sure or I can be your contact lenses for eyes' cure all these things I offer,now bring your friendship key True friends are hard to find_needed trait being kind A listening ear_joy, sorrow share if so inclined New friends are great but keep the old New friends are silver; old are the gold true friendships are like a gentle prevailing wind ==================================== PART 1: kashinath karmakar PART 2: Sara Kendrick Contest: Grab a Mate and Collaborate Sponsor: Tracie Edwards

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/16/2011 3:44:00 PM

congratulations on your win - love "warmth of morning's first cup of tea in me" - great line :)

Jack Horne

Date: 9/16/2011 1:18:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Kash : )

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/15/2011 9:41:00 PM

Great win kashinath. Congratulations on your firendship and win. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/15/2011 8:48:00 PM

Hooray for you!! This is a wonderful poem of a wonderful friendship!! Well done!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2011 8:01:00 PM

Congrats Kash on your wonderful win with this collaboration with Sara.. awesome piece luv for 5th place ...

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/30/2011 9:34:00 AM

This sounds like a Proverb...so much truth in this collab. If there were no prevailing winds, there would be no movement of air...stagnation would certainly set in. Congrats on your win in ADVANCE! Both of you. Gwendolen

Constance La France

Date: 8/29/2011 5:37:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem of friendship, both of you did very well, best of luck in the contest, and thanks so much for your ever comments on my prose, I so appreciate that~~

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/29/2011 1:22:00 PM

This is a stunning collab Kash and Sara, really beautiful.. Wishing you both the best of luck with this gem ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2011 1:52:00 AM

how wonderful that you and Sara paird up to do this, Kash. Cute poems from both of you. and nice how you settled on the last part of her poem for the title of both. Take care this weekend. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/27/2011 8:10:00 PM

Kash, this is awesome! Please see the comments I left on Sara's entry. Beautiful! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2011 7:30:00 PM

It looks very nicely put together..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/27/2011 5:34:00 PM

soup mail Kash..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/27/2011 4:49:00 PM

sorry Kash I checked with tracie and if u go to my blog for the contest u will see she answered that I cannot join with another poet after I submitted an entry .. am sure u will find one to complete this piece.. how about Jack Horne..?? he luvs contests too.. good luck luv...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2011 9:57:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one..So warm and inviting..Soup mail soon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2011 10:15:00 PM

Kash, I just read what Dr. Ram said, I think he is right. YOur part can only be five lines. Just put each two lines together!! Then you will make it into a five line poem!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2011 10:13:00 PM

oh, my, Kashinath, if I'd seen this a few days ago I'd surely have done it with you!! I have agreed to collaborate with Susan, but I wish I could do this with you too. It's very interesting you used the term "true friend" I wrote a poem for a friend at Soup today and I used that exact phrase after I saw the wonderful poem he did for me. You too are one of my true friends, just wanted you to know that. I sure hope someone does this with you! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/26/2011 4:19:00 PM

Kash I have asked tracie if I can collab with more than one poet to enter her contest .. since I already entered with Constance I would not be able to enter my part again but this is too lovely to pass by ..so soon as tracie lets me know I would like to accept the challenge if allowed my friend.. am sure someone will ..u are a gem of a poet ..good luck..thankxx for your comment..must be on my wedding anniversary high ..haha..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/26/2011 4:08:00 PM

awhhh, why just now, kashi??.. come visit! :)huggs ya, nette

Constance La France

Date: 8/26/2011 3:59:00 PM

Wonderful words, Kash, I hope someone takes up your challenge,I would but I already submitted with a partner, and thanks Kash, for your ever support of me and my prose~~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/26/2011 3:46:00 PM

I think you are expected to write five lines only or you want to cut the last five lines and collaborate, kashinath

Kash Poet

Date: 8/26/2011 3:21:00 PM

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