A Gentle Breeze

It begins as a gentle breeze that rustles the leaves with its touch. Scurrying through the tops of trees, it begins as a gentle breeze. Not enough to discourage bees, it is barely brisk; it isn't much. It begins as a gentle breeze that rustles the leaves with its touch. It is barely brisk; it isn't much, until that breeze begins to gust. Yet birds can still escape its clutch: it is barely brisk; it isn't much. It topples garbage cans and such, gathering up a cloud of dust. It is barely brisk; it isn't much, until that breeze begins to gust. Gathering up a cloud of dust, a darkness blocks out the Sun's light. And winds blow, with increasing thrust; gathering up a cloud of dust. When the sky turns orangey rust, tornadoes are a frightful sight. Gathering up a cloud of dust, a darkness blocks out the Sun's light. Tornadoes are a frightful sight, with debris flying through the air. Morphing into objects of might, tornadoes are a frightful sight. Finding cover, we hang on tight, for flying shrapnel packs a scare. Tornadoes are a frightful sight, with debris flying through the air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Duet Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Wow, Emile! A perfect description of the wind's power and how it builds up and up 'til you have a full-blown hurricane and living here in Louisiana I've experienced it first hand. Excellent poem!
Pinet Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 6:44 PM
Thanks Carole, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 8:14 PM
The rhyme is SO VERY rich, Emile. Awesome form.
Pinet Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Thanks so much Line I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 1:49 AM
Congrats once again Emile! loved another read!
Pinet Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Thank you so much Upma, I appreciate it. Emile.
A  Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Emile, it's nice to see this one with a new placement. Congrats!!!!! LOVE **SKAT**
Pinet Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Thanks so much SKAT, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 8:02 PM
A 7-plus, Emile! I love how the progression in this expertly-written poem parallels the progression in nature from a breeze to a raging wind storm! Great poem Janice
Pinet Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Thanks so much Janice, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Richards Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:42 PM
So lovely, and such a difficult form as well !! So glad this one had another chance at the spotlight!! Congratulations Emile!!
Pinet Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Thanks Carrie, I appreciate you friendly comments. Emile.
Tor Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Emile congratulations on your win my friend!
Pinet Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Thanks Michael, I appreciate it. Emile.
Nunez Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 4:16 PM
This poem is another reason why I appreciate Broken's HM contest. Awesome triolets, I can't believe this got an HM! Glad that it finally got recognition. Congrats, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Thanks so much Kim, I truly appreciate your comments. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 1:16 AM
Congrats on your superb winning write Emile!
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 6:58 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate it. Emile.
Allison Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Emile:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 3:01 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
A  Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 11:10 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE
Pinet Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate the opportunity to participate. Emile.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 1:47 AM
Emile, You are among my fave triolet writers here in Soup... =') love this one so groovy and lovely!!!!~Olive Eloisa =')!
Pinet Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Thank you so much Olive, I appreciate it. Emile.
Anish Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:10 PM
We have not yet conquered nature and are still often subject to its whims as you show in this fine piece. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Pinet Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 9:07 AM
Thanks Matthew, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Muideen Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 5:33 PM
What a beautiful and wonderful, I love your subject Emile; how it was constructed, It flows eloquent and powerful a 7 and a fav............A.M.
Pinet Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Thanks so much Afolabi, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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August 29, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Dear Emile, Breeze is gentle and the poem is awesome ...so well structured with such appropriate words creating a picture and feel of blowing breeze......a 7! Good luck for the contest....love, Anu:-)
Pinet Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Thanks so much Anulaxmi, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
May Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 10:05 PM
A gentle breeze with attitude...I like the progression to its fury ...very nicely penned...best wises
Pinet Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it. Emile.
Nau Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 7:53 PM
Ha! Gust or Bust and I've lived through enough Dust Storms to relate! I love it. It's perfect and not a tweak in site. It's a 7+ and a Fav
Pinet Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:13 AM
Thanks so much Edlynn, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Laurie Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 7:19 PM
Wow Emile, you've done a terrific job with this poem - good luck in the contest - Lindsay
Pinet Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Thanks so much Lindsay, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
United Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 6:10 PM
WOW Emile I struggle to write one triolet - i love the way you have blended them so cleverly from stanza to stanza building up the impact from calm to a gale - fabulous pen my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Thanks so much Jadazzle, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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