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A Genius In My Home

My sweet little Grace loves wearing poka dotta lace She is a sweet little genius But also too ingenuous For my sweet daughter, naughty, but caring and sensitive to other people's pains and feelings

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/25/2012 5:55:00 AM

A personal Clerihew! Wow! She should be delighted..what kind of lace does she like to wear? You could drop the word "who" in the 2nd line if u write an adjective about her lace. It adds more personal detail about her and keeps it short..my sweet little Grace loves wearing poka dotta lace...just helping u fine tune a little..I am trying to truncate mine a bit too..Enjoyed. gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2012 8:20:00 PM

this is a very special little clerihew. NICELY done, and good luck on your sonnet, Modupe.