A Genius In My Home

My sweet little Grace
                     loves wearing poka dotta lace
                      She is a sweet little genius
                        But also too ingenuous












For my sweet daughter, naughty, but caring and sensitive to other people's  pains and feelings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 25, 2012 at 5:55 AM
A personal Clerihew! Wow! She should be delighted..what kind of lace does she like to wear? You could drop the word "who" in the 2nd line if u write an adjective about her lace. It adds more personal detail about her and keeps it short..my sweet little Grace loves wearing poka dotta lace...just helping u fine tune a little..I am trying to truncate mine a bit too..Enjoyed. gwendolen
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August 24, 2012 at 8:20 PM
this is a very special little clerihew. NICELY done, and good luck on your sonnet, Modupe.
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