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A Garden With Wings


                                    I

      A striped butterfly hovers on Chrysanthemum,
      With blooms providing the beloved sweet nectar;
The sweetness that butterflies want more than life itself.

      Bright dazzling orange bursts in a sunny garden,
      Calling to the flying jewels swirling and twirling;
It is said butterflies and flowers are meant for each other.


                                    II

      In my little city garden I have planted flowers,
      And it is there that I find inspiration for poems; 
A place of contemplation where flying flowers soothe my soul.

      I work to create their wish list safe sanctuary,
     Of sunny open space and muddy water they love;
Shelter from the wind amongst asters, cornflowers and daisies.

      A flat garden stone for basking in the sunshine,
      The solitude creates feelings deep within my soul;
Images that float on wings in my mind and flutter into words.

      Surreal poetry that I release into the wind,
      That go drifting on beautiful butterfly wings.

  

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May 6, 2015

Free Verse/ Ekphrasis/A Garden With Wings
Copyright Protected, 05-67-0-726-06
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

Submitted into the Premier contest, Your Favorite Old Poem #3 
sponsor, Shadow Hamilton, Judged 2015 

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 6/30/2015 6:47:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/28/2015 9:50:00 AM
You are on a winning streak, congratulations!
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:51:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2015 5:18:00 AM
stunning images float through my mind Connie superb poem Congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 6/24/2015 9:53:00 AM
This poem was originally written for a Giorgio contest, 2015 that was never judged because he left the site. And for some reason also got not a single comment. Now I have an opportunity to re-submit it to Shadow Hamilton's contest, Your Favorite Old Poem #3.
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