A Garden In Dream

One day in dream I saw
in the lap of garden that
looked beautiful and green,
The flowers were painting colors on leaves 
And butterflies were singing
with lovable beguiling tone.

Leaves of trees were making adorable music and
surroundings was perfuming 
with breeze mild cold,
Entire garden was looking so enthralling
with the hip-hop that
colorful squirrel performed.

With the passing of time
Sun took rest behind the hill,
Before stars twinkling,
birds slept on the green carpet
changing into human they all,
And  converting them into birds
the trees winged  in the dense sky
making air nice chill.

Suddenly I got up from sleep
after hearing the morning whistle of crow,
Still trees were looking likes birds
And told me to make a garden of your own
by giving a massive wind blow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/12/2018 7:53:00 PM
This is excellent. Love it :)
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Date: 4/20/2017 10:27:00 AM
Hello Manmath. This is beautiful. Such is a dream I would love to stay in. Your expressions are poetic and your imagery is marvelous. In dreams we see and hear all. I very much enjoyed this. Well done entirely and completely. Enjoy the day.
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Date: 4/16/2017 8:54:00 PM
Great imagery, surreal and inspiring to create such a garden and appreciate that life offers us such rare gifts when love holds us in its welcoming grasp! A7 and a gem my friend..
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Date: 3/18/2017 11:03:00 AM
Exquisite imagery, my friend.
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 3/18/2017 11:33:00 AM
Thanks a lot for ur friendly visit & valued comment.
Date: 3/18/2017 9:07:00 AM
The surreal touch is beautifully unmistakeable ...
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 3/18/2017 11:33:00 AM
Thanks a lot for ur friendly visit & valued comment.
Date: 3/18/2017 1:11:00 AM
What a wonderful garden you describe here. Just lovely Manmath
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 3/18/2017 2:03:00 AM
Thanks a lot for ur friendly visit & valued comment.
Date: 3/18/2017 12:24:00 AM
I would be happy to be in that garden or that dream!!! Lovely!!
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 3/18/2017 12:28:00 AM
Thank u Arthur for ur valuable comment. It is within you to make ur own dream get fulfill.
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