A Gallivanting Romeo

A gallivanting Romeo, he rode
into my world, so handsome and unique.
Finesse with a seductive gaze he showed!
The few times that I saw him, he would seek
a rendezvous with me. I had a ring
on my left finger, and I do not stray
from my commitments. Yet my heart would sing
to see his gaze! For strength I had to pray.
Precarious was my position. He
tried hard to make me acquiesce, but I
would not give in - though dreams of ecstasy
assailed me! Then I learned about his lie. . .
I called him on it. Nonchalant he grew.
There should have been a ring on HIS hand too!

May 10, 2018 for Emile Pinet's  New Poems (8 difficult words) Contest
The eight words are these: ecstasy, rendezvous, unique, finesse, precarious,
gallivanting, nonchalant, acquiesce

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Date: 5/15/2018 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 5/14/2018 7:54:00 AM
such a wonderful and well crafted poem ..just love the story ))..very creative work and provokes lots of wonderful images
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Date: 5/13/2018 9:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, dear Andie. These words were super challenging and you made it seem so easy to craft such an artful, amazing piece! I salute my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/12/2018 9:55:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 5/12/2018 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 5/12/2018 1:19:00 AM
Good luck in the contest. This is a beautiful piece of poetry,Andrea. He sounds like a scoundrel to me; you can do much much better!
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Date: 5/11/2018 9:18:00 AM
You excel with these poetic challenges.
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Date: 5/11/2018 8:55:00 AM
While my horse was gallantly gallivanting, Soon out of breath, he had been panting, And did die; Don't know why; Damp daisies on grave will be planting.
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Date: 5/11/2018 6:27:00 AM
Not easy to fit those words, yet you come up with one beautiful sonnet, excellent Andrea
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Date: 5/11/2018 6:02:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your story Andrea. You wrapped the difficult words into a great sonnet. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/11/2018 1:45:00 AM
What a great write this is Andrea.Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 5/11/2018 1:26:00 AM
This is a great poem to show that not all is as it seems. That a person who is unfaithful will always be that way. I praise the good person for not giving in and destroying their life. It was a really nice Read.
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Date: 5/11/2018 1:07:00 AM
what an awesome sonnet Andrea you excel at every form you write!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/11/2018 12:47:00 AM
Bravo! It pays not to play. Love the way you pulled the whole idea together at the end. GL in the contest.
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Date: 5/11/2018 12:14:00 AM
Beautiful entry for the contest, Andrea. Great job.
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Date: 5/10/2018 11:57:00 PM
Smooth as silk. Great job on the challenge, Andrea. A beauty.
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