James Fraser Poet Rhyme

A Futuristic Christmas

It's hard to believe that another five years have passed
When one looks around it's quite amazing for one to see
How did we survive such when we were to be our last
Where we once lived, we still live among the trees

Even our skies are different from those few years before
But it's our spirits that meld together keeping us as we
From this Christmas day we must learn, fuse all, implore
Unite as human beings, allow the Universe to see




28/11/15

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Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2017 at 8:41 AM Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one.

Hansteven Selfa December 29, 2015 at 10:00 AM Simply the cream of the crop! Congratulations!!! :) James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 1:43 PM Thank you kindly ~~ James :)

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2015 at 11:17 PM WONDERFUL WIN....LINDA James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 1:42 PM Thank you kindly PD ~~ James :)

Skat A December 28, 2015 at 10:23 PM A very nice win. SKAT James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 1:41 PM Thank you SKAT ~~ James :)

Suzanne Delaney December 28, 2015 at 2:11 AM A good message on keeping. The spirit of Christmas. Congratulations on your winning poem. SuZ James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 1:09 PM Thank you kindly Suzanne ~~ James ~~ :) :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 28, 2015 at 1:43 AM Great take on the theme and a wonderful poetry James.. congrats on top place win! James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 12:56 PM Thank you so much Dr. Upma ~~ James ~~ :)

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2015 at 8:50 PM awesome win there, James. BIG congrats to you! James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 12:48 PM Many thanks Andrea, always appreciate your comments ~~ hugs ~~ James :) :)

Eve Roper December 27, 2015 at 7:39 PM Congratulations on your win, James!!! James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 12:44 PM Thank you kindly Eve ~~ hugs ~~ James :) :)

Sandra Haight December 27, 2015 at 7:24 PM Nicely said, James. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 12:35 PM Thank you kindly Sandra, back at you also ~~ James :) :)

Viv Wigley December 27, 2015 at 7:15 PM Congratulations, fellow topster, and all the best to you both for the New year. Regards, Viv James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 12:24 PM Many thanks Viv, much appreciated. Wishing you a Happy and Healthy 2016 ~~ James :)

Susan Gentry December 27, 2015 at 2:02 PM Congratulations on the your win. James Fraser December 28, 2015 at 12:57 PM Thank you kindly Susan ~~ James ~~ :)

Beautiful Scars December 27, 2015 at 1:59 PM James, many congrats on your win, as Jan has said below! Very creative and I adored it! -luloo *smiles* *congrats* James Fraser December 28, 2015 at 12:31 PM Thank you so much Laura, very much appreciated ~~ James :)

Jan Allison December 27, 2015 at 1:35 PM Many congrats on your win James - my entry is too late for the contest will probably post it tomorrow:-) 2016 will be so so special for you and Olive:-) hugs Jan xx James Fraser December 28, 2015 at 11:22 AM Thank you kindly Jan, for I'm smiling that this poem has been liked as it has been ~~ hugs ~~ James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 1, 2015 at 5:35 PM huge one, over the years the celebration of Christmas has been constantly changing what I appreciate here in the Philippines stilll some traditions are maintained and I believe this is too all over the world but sad to see the meaning of Christmas has been taken for granted by some... Soon James we will be celebrating lots of Christmas together,,~Olive Eloisa James Fraser December 8, 2015 at 11:24 AM Spending Christmas with you brightens my heart like a fully lit tree. It'll soon be 2016, and what a Christmas that's going to be ~ hugs little one ~ // your Huge James ;-) xx ~~ xx