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Will I get my dream job, car, or home? Each instance of fate hangs upon whim, Like that of the bluebirds, born to roam. Will I get my dream job, car, or home? Amidst the questing, time's often flown, For chance dwells in a region, very dim. Will I get my dream job, car or home? Each instance of fate hangs upon whim. Written on 12/25/2022 For: Chance Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 12/30/2022 12:35:00 PM
A fun write/picture. Many times we only want something. Then get it and are unhappy. Happy New Year 2023.........................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/30/2022 6:53:00 PM
Yes, sometimes what we want isn't what we need at all. Thank you for the fine compliment. Happy New Year! :)
Date: 12/26/2022 10:04:00 AM
so true. I think you did a great job with the theme, Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/26/2022 4:14:00 PM
Thank you for your warm words of support, Andrea. :)
Date: 12/26/2022 12:23:00 AM
A good description. We never know what the future holds. Well written.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/26/2022 9:18:00 AM
I appreciate your kind expressions so much, Jeanette.
Date: 12/25/2022 7:12:00 PM
Whim and caprice. Such is life... Merry Xmas to you, Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/25/2022 7:26:00 PM
Life always holds surprises, both good and bad. Hope you enjoy the last hours of Christmas. :)

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