Bl Devnath Poet Monorhyme

A Funny Thought of a Race

an ant and an elephant joined in a race
                         a demarcated straight line made their base
                            referee rat has tightened its shoe lace 
                       as soon as it whistled both they gave own pace
               seen all they're in different places so don't see one other's face 


           

      First time monorhyme trial. Not sure, what i have written. P.S. please advice

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Andrea Dietrich March 25, 2016 at 8:24 PM the monorhyming is correct, BL. No worry on that part! Bl Devnath March 26, 2016 at 11:25 AM Thanks my lovely friend for confirming me with comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2016 at 1:56 PM - Yes that was a fun thought :) - .... small and large do the best they can :) - A great one, dear Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath March 25, 2016 at 2:09 PM Thanks God first, i am safe. Thank you for your appreciation with comment and inspiration. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl