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A Funny Thought of a Race

an ant and an elephant joined in a race a demarcated straight line made their base referee rat has tightened its shoe lace as soon as it whistled both they gave own pace seen all they're in different places so don't see one other's face First time monorhyme trial. Not sure, what i have written. P.S. please advice

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Date: 3/25/2016 8:24:00 PM
the monorhyming is correct, BL. No worry on that part!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 3/26/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for confirming me with comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 3/25/2016 1:56:00 PM
- Yes that was a fun thought :) - .... small and large do the best they can :) - A great one, dear Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 3/25/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thanks God first, i am safe. Thank you for your appreciation with comment and inspiration. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl

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