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A funny thing happened on the way to mall

Few years ago a funny thing happened on the way to mall As I was walking a really beautiful girl hugged me, Lol She told me to play along and to a guy introduced me as her boyfriend She was still giving me embrace and I was feeling all cozy and cold That guy ask me my name and said that its been a pleasure Told me that he is her ex and he is glad that her new boyfriend Is ugly as a hell After that guy left,she said me thanks and proceed to leave Thinking that this might be my chance, I proceed I told her that I am the nephew of famous romantic person uncle steve And trying to be romantic I told her that she had stolen my heart just like a thief It is love at first sight, atleast that's what I believe If I am Adam, shall you be my Eve? For a second I thought that she was impressed Hurray I thought that I had passed the test But she said are you insane? O romantic soul have some shame you don't even know my name And I was right, all guys are same But another funny thing happened to me, this time in my home My mother told me that a family is coming to see me And might like me, so you have dress to change and hairs to comb Feeling really nervous I opened the door and guess what. It was a jackpot I saw a couple, with them the same girl I met in the mall Now she was begging me not to tell her parents about her ex Years later I asked her one question that If I hadn't met you at mall Upon seeing me, would you have still said yes Bingo, she said no, funny how fate plays A funny thing in mall turned into a beautiful marriage And now we shall be together for rest of my life and for always
4 July 2018 28 lines A fictional poem For the contest " A funny thing happened on the way to " Sponsor " Robert Haigh"

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Date: 7/18/2018 8:34:00 AM
This is clever and fun. Well done, great story telling.
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Date: 7/9/2018 12:02:00 AM
Oh such a lovely romantic story Faraz, truly enjoyed from beginning to end. A Fave for me...Maria :)
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:12:00 PM
Nice story...
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Date: 7/7/2018 6:07:00 PM
you told a fabulous story Faraz:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/5/2018 3:11:00 PM
oh funny how you turned it all around. GREAT fictional story telling, Faraz!! I really enjoyed that.
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Date: 7/5/2018 3:10:00 PM
thanks for exploring my poetry and finding that first post. It was right before Xmas so I don't really feel like I joined in 2009 since it was so close to 2010!! Yes, so many poets have come and gone. Now to see your latest poem.
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Date: 7/4/2018 6:54:00 PM
Reads like a great movie Faraz...nicely executed my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 7/4/2018 1:06:00 PM
Amazing ability of relating a story dear friend, Faraz! Captivating!
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Date: 7/3/2018 5:13:00 PM
This is a hoot, Faraz! Think I just found a special P-Souper!!! Cheers!
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Date: 7/3/2018 4:51:00 PM
Great story telling Faraz..
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