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A Funny Bunny Poem For Kids

Bibbety Bobbity bunny went shopping with his mum She bought him a pogo stick so he could have some fun For other bunnies had teased him about his enormous ears Poor Bibbety got so upset he’d run to his mum in tears Now he’d got his pogo stick he’d bounce around all day Couldn’t wait to show off and hear what other bunnies say Some bunnies gathered round him to see what he could do He gave one ginormous bounce and into the air he flew Bibbety Bobbity bunny had bounced oh so very high He left the earth’s surface and landed in the sky The other bunnies shouted for him to come back to land But Bibbety went zooming high, he was feeling oh so grand Hopping on fluffy clouds of iced pink cotton candy Bibbety thought life in the sky was so very fine and dandy For now his long floppy ears acted as a propeller He became a bunny helicopter, oh what a clever fella Bibbety Bobbity bunny thought he could have a little fun By dancing on the rainclouds and blocking out the sun Hopping about on misty clouds made him want the loo There are no toilets in the sky, what should poor Bibbety do? A stream of rabbit droppings falling from the sky Could really hurt someone if it hit them in the eye So Bibbety grabbed his long ears and made a bunny nappy He floated back down to earth and he was really happy Bibbety’s pogo stick just disappeared and his flying day is over He now just plays in his garden and nibbles sweet spring clover 10~20~15 N/A in contest judged on 05/21/16
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A  Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 1:32 AM
Awesome win, Jan... skat
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Many thanks for your continued support Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 2:15 PM
This is brilliant Jan....please print this with some wonderful pictures would be a sell out....Seren
Allison Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Aww Seren you are too kind - I could always do it as a kindle book I guess - was written for the soup contest funny poem for kids but bombed so I'm so grateful for the second chance contests:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan! Hugs
Allison Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 5:46 PM
Hi buddy. Congrats for your WIN with these brilliant, animated verses!! ;-)
Allison Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Thanks so much Teddy I am so pleased to place in a contest with my fun poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Jan, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 5:48 PM
Thanks so much Eve its so lovely for my poem to get read again it was such a fun write for children:-) hugs Jan xx
Ale Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 4:27 PM
Awww, I loved it!!! This is awesome! x
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 4:31 PM
awww thanks Rizo - i just had fun with this one I am delighted it has received such lovely comments:-) hugs jan xx
Hunjeri Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 11:45 AM
Lol very nice! Jan you should def do a kids book .you are really good at this. Def a 7!
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 12:12 PM
I may do one day Njeri:-) hugs jan xx
Rv Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Hehe!! This is fantastic, dear Jan!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 7:14 AM
Thanks Sneha I had fun writing this - am not sure if it is 'funny' enough for the contest it is so hard to know what they want:-) hugs jan xx
Leiser Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 8:06 PM
Very fun and sweet story, creatively written, too! Great poem, Jan, and I hope it places well in the contest :)
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 1:57 AM
Thanks Laura - there are 75 places in the contest and 3 winners - I am just grateful I've had so many reads and comments - a win would be a bonus but I am just happy I've had so much lovely feedback:-) hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Perfect - my fav so far for the contest. You went there - you did - people we have poo! Good for you because this is very clever and catchy to the ear. I think a child would be very entertained ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 7:12 PM
I went for a fantasy fun write Caycay and I'm delighted to have had such a positive response:-) may pen another bibbety poem - he is very close to my heart for personal reasons:-) hugs jan xx
Boddie Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 3:57 PM
dr seuss is in trouble....jan Allison, on the double....bibbety is an instant classic in the eyes of this man....if I had a kid, he or she would know how bibbety got back to land....;)
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 7:10 PM
LOL Eric always a pleasure to see your poetic comments - I would hope children would enjoy this simple but fun poem:-) hugs jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 7:56 AM
I like the name of the rabbit but i like more the bouncy way you deliver this poem.. this nice to recite infront of many children with some pics.. =`)~Olive Eloisa hugsxx
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 7:59 AM
I've had so many lovely comments Olive - the name of the rabbit is one dear to my heart:-) hugs jan xx
Sathasivam Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 3:10 AM
Excellent. Lovely poem. Surely, all the Kids will enjoy this poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 3:16 AM
Thanks so much Ravi:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 1:59 AM
I am thinking, you could do a book on this stuff, really is that good!
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:11 AM
I get a lot of inspiration here with the playground antics on the site lol :-) hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 1:58 AM
What a cute poem! and I will be reading this to Timmy and Maya soon!
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:09 AM
Aww thanks Arthur - hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 1:54 AM
so playful it delights me so, jan...love that child in you; beautiful work!.. huggs
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 1:56 AM
Thanks Nette I do appreciate your support:-) hugs jan xx
Deschler Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 8:04 PM
I bet any child would have lots of fun reading this charming poem... Very nicely done, Jan! Good luck in the contest!
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 1:31 AM
Thanks Kelly I'm not sure if it is funny enough for the contest but I had fun writing it:-) hugs Jan xx
Laurie Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 6:59 PM
G'day Jan... you had me smiling with this children's poem Jan - good luck - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 6:15 PM
This is delightful and is long enough to make a child's book and with the right art work..Bibbety Bobbity would soon be famous....Really Good.....
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 6:20 PM
aww thanks Judy I hope it's not too long ... i read a poem today about liking short writes - I read anything as long as it grabs my attention:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 5:07 PM
How sweet and lovely, Jan!! Just the type of poem that most children would go for. Bibbety Bobbity bunny is cute and funny and as sweet as honey:) Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 5:09 PM
Thanks Paul:-) I have seen some lovely poems - will be interesting to see the winning poems - I can't imagine the task of judging the contest with so many entrants!:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 3:58 PM
Cute as a bouncing BUNNY rabbit!! Love your rabbit TAIL!!!
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 4:02 PM
LOL love your clever comment and thanks:-) hugs jan xxx
Smith Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 3:55 PM
Simply delightful Jan. You really know how to write kids stories.
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Aww thanks Tim I'm glad you enjoyed it - not sure if it is funny enough for the contest but its a fun write for kids:-) hugs jan xx
Nance Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 1:35 PM
Okay... I've had to read it aloud to her three times already...The child judge loves it..hope tps does too!! :)
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 1:48 PM
I'm grinning like a Cheshire cat thanks Cas:-) hugs to you and Abby:-) Jan xx
Nance Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Abby says "That's a good story"...Mommy says that was a tongue twister read!...Was very clever...Abby is saying Bibbety Bobbity bunny...catchy!
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 1:47 PM
Aww thank you Abby and Cas for the review ... I am so pleased top class poetry judge Abby Nance approves - you have made my day:-) hugs jan xx
Woods    Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 1:16 PM
I got a good chuckle from this, I'm sure children would love this amusing yarn. Good luck in the contest.
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 1:18 PM
I'm not sure if it is funny enough for the contest Mark - but I would hope kid's would like it:-) hugs jan xx
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