A Fun Poem

As we look forward 
to a (Revolution)
in living and loving 
the retired life.
I was hoping my wife,
who is teaching me 
how to speak toddler.
Would lead me to a 
(Spontaneous) (Fixation),
to (Patronize) 
our two year old granddaughter, 
and (Navigate) the (Portal) of some 
(Tangible)(Intrigue).
And provide the older grand kids
with some exciting games 
and entertainment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kinard Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Thank you, and yes I am proud grandpa but I wrote this poem to to enter a contest where you had to use certain words. I am waiting to hear how did and if won.
Hawley Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 12:09 PM
You did a good job of capturing that story, although I would fairly call that a story more a poem, less. Good job on the details and the image of what happened.
Kinard Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Thank you, and yes I am a proud grandpa but I wrote this poem to enter a contest. I’m waiting to see how I did and if I won.
Hawley Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Sounds like you are a proud grandpa.
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