A Fugitive

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A flower wakes up Finds shelter where lies turn truth And Its true colors bloom. * Sponsor: Julia Ward Contest Date: 4/9/16 Contest Name: "A Fugitive"

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Abosede Ogundare

Date: 3/17/2016 9:55:00 AM

Nice poem Iris..

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/18/2016 8:16:00 PM

Thank U Abosede. We'll c what become of it.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/16/2016 5:17:00 PM

A very colorful take on the theme. For some girls it definitely is a fugitive ... with the way they stick those little guys in their hair. Wordplay is a delight to me, and you did it yet again in this one, just like Big Fat Change. Very pretty, Iris.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/18/2016 8:18:00 PM

Tim, we'll c what become of it. Thank U for sharing such positive vibes.