Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

A Frozen Tear

Home, a place I used to have
Replaced by the solace
The foreboding of winter
Sends a  chill deep within 

I hold hands with yesterday
We quietly embrace
Till the wind blows us free
The winter has set in
And now tiss only me

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Michael Tor July 3, 2022 at 9:51 PM Arthur your second poem, Poem Of The week honors. Impressive... I could feel that chill deep within in this seperation. Exceptional write...

Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 15, 2015 at 9:09 AM loneliness is sad, but solitude is desired :) love this poem ~7~ Arthur Vaso November 15, 2015 at 3:51 PM You are so sweet, thank you! :)

Robert Nehls June 19, 2014 at 10:01 PM Wow, Arthur. This is a wonderful poem. So much emotion in just a few lines. I can feel the chill, the emptiness that you feel. Very well written..... Robert. Arthur Vaso June 19, 2014 at 10:41 PM Thank you for your kind words, much appreciated!

Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2013 at 12:25 AM Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

Shirley Candy July 7, 2013 at 9:11 PM Congratz for being this week featured poem..! this such a lovely poem...nicely written... *shirley* Arthur Vaso July 7, 2013 at 9:55 PM thank you so much!!

Jillian Veitenheimer March 9, 2013 at 12:23 AM I love the wording in this and how ..."wind chilled" it is. Great! Arthur Vaso May 10, 2015 at 10:18 PM Thank you, sorry for so long to answer

Anne P. Murray March 3, 2013 at 8:33 AM I too hold hands with yesterday, walking alone in the thoughts and memories, wishing for one last endearing kiss. Beautiful poem, words that endear Arthur Vaso November 15, 2015 at 3:50 PM Sorry for so late reply, but thank you so much!!!!!

Keith Bickerstaffe February 26, 2013 at 10:00 AM '...I hold hands with yesterday, we quietly embrace,' lovely phrasing and wistful sentiment. Beautifully written! Best wishes, Keith Arthur Vaso November 15, 2015 at 3:49 PM Thanks Keith, I am embarrassed I seemed to have missed so many comments! cheers

Seren Roberts February 24, 2013 at 6:41 AM decided to read them all again my friend....Seren Arthur Vaso November 15, 2015 at 3:48 PM No idea how I missed to reply to so many comments! thank you

Lillie Williams February 19, 2013 at 11:45 PM As the song says; Its so hard to say good bye to yesterday. Another beautiful write. I like it a lot. Arthur Vaso November 15, 2015 at 3:48 PM Sorry for late reply, and thank you so much!!!

Yanny Widjanarko February 16, 2013 at 3:30 PM I love the second stanza, they are so touching :) Arthur Vaso November 15, 2015 at 3:47 PM Sorry for late replay, but I think you 1000 times! :)

Charmaine Chircop February 10, 2013 at 7:52 AM Holding hands with yesterday and so.many memories.BeAutiful poem.Welcome to poetrysoup :) Arthur Vaso November 15, 2015 at 3:47 PM A belated BIG thank you!!!

Poet Destroyer A December 10, 2012 at 3:13 PM good poem,,thank you for sharing...pd Arthur Vaso February 8, 2013 at 2:52 PM Thank you very much, very kind of you! :)