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A Friend In Passing

Along the path I chose, I met a man
A kindred spirit drifting in the wind
Like me, he was the youngest of his clan
We both were wounded warriors on the mend

Instilled with principles he would not bend
He traveled with me miles through sun and rain
It was my privilege to call him friend
I leaned on him as if he was my cane

But when I met a girl, I changed my lane
Then took a turn toward my destiny
His recent passing now leaves me in pain
Because he brought out all the best in me

Though paths may join, at some point they must part
Then sadness fills the void left in the heart


   by Daniel Turner
in memory of my friend Ron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Villalon Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 6:53 PM
Thank you for dropping by my page Sir Daniel. Cliff
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Lovely tribute, Daniel. Very touching.
Callus Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 9:20 AM
Beautiful, albeit sad, Danny. I'm pleased to be re-reading this poem which touched me from day one. Regards // paul
Barden Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 9:33 PM
(2) We grew up at a time when "guys" just didn't say that to each other, but I have learned to throw those foolish precepts away in deference of what's truly important in this life. I can hear his voice right now, and I miss him so - he was supposed to be on my album, but that won't happen. I did name my favorite guitar after him, so he'll be on the album after all. Blessings and peace to you, My Friend ... grief is not a bad thing, but originates in love ... embrace it, and hang in there. <3
Barden Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 9:29 PM
This is so touching and poignantly melancholy, My Friend, and I am so sorry for your loss. I lost a close buddy a couple of years ago right before Christmas, and it's a tough time now. I am grateful when the pain comes, because remembering is how I keep him alive, and that pain is the residual left from love. Most of my friends are women, but he was a bandmate for years, and like family. Best thing is, the last thing we said to each other was "I love you", and I'm proud of that ...
Cornish Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 2:06 PM
Daniel, I must believe that your friend Ron is honored and will cherish these thoughts.
Daniel Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Hi DT, dropping by to wish you a wonderful and a blessed New Year 2019:) hope to see you around soon:)
Warrior Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 5:54 AM
Lovely tribute my friend...miss you bud...have a wonderful holiday season and the merriest of Christmases...happy endings, Daniel...love & light...^WW^...{*J*}
Smith Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Merry Christmas Daniel, peace be with you my Friend...
Mo Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 12:43 AM
Hi DT. Sorry about your friend. You have expressed your friendship so well
Canerdy Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Danny, this is so beautiful and poignant. Yes, we grow up, go our own ways, and lose sight of valuable relationships forged early in life! Janice
Curtis Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Sorry for your loss Dan
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Hmm, did I see this at pft? It's so familiar and SO poignant, Danny. Very well done
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Just read your comment on Nina's atheist poem. Loved what you said. haven't seen you around lately . Let me check out this poem.
Smith Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 11:06 AM
How wonderful such friendships are to cherish, well done my friend...
Laurie Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 7:10 PM
G'day Daniel … a wonderful tribute and quite moving - thank you - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 1:02 PM
I know I read this lovely tribute to your friend Daniel, but I don't see my comment. I am sorry for your loss. I have also lost a few close friends and the memories of our happy times help keep me company. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Bavington  Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 8:12 PM
There are no words to describe the loss of a family member or friend. You did a great tribute. You and his family are in my prayers.
Duet Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 8:12 PM
I'm so glad you found a friend who you could truly relate to, Danny, and so sorry that he is gone from your life now. However, he is immortal now because of your wonderful poem about him. I'm sure he would be very proud to know you dedicated this to him. Who knows anyway? Maybe he already knows.
Teagan Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 8:36 AM
You are blessed to have had a friend like that. This is a most beautiful tribute, Daniel. I'm so very sorry for your loss.
Duet Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 5:33 PM
What a great tribute to a friend indeed! Sorry for the loss of your dear friend, Danny.
Daniel Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 7:53 AM
A great write and so true, DT, hope you are well:) my deepest condolences:)
Hauser  Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 3:02 AM
Sadly beautiful my friend
Sergi Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Hi Daniel: I was touched by that sad tribute to a friend that changed your life. My compliments!
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 8:19 AM
a heartfelt tribute DT so sorry for your loss:-( hugs Jan xx
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