A Friend In Doubt

A Friend in Doubt
WLM
Wildncrazy555
July 2, 2011 

Thought I had a true friend
He would be there till the end
In the end I found out 
What he was all about
Making me the shrew
And giving me the screw
Though the years we were there
All we did was help and share
You show concern 
But then you learn
His name is Jimmy and so full of bull
He treats most as a fool
Once he is alone
It will finally lost last be shown
Just keep on to thyself lying
Because soon you will be dying
Things will be better in the end
Cause life will be begin again
But now a lost friend to me 
So my life is finally free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 11:36 AM
Congrats on your win, Bill. Excellent piece. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
K. Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Wow, yup being betrayed by a friend can indeed hurt-- definitely felt that in this write, William-- and yup some people can indeed chain you as well- I am happy for you that you were freed-- Congrats on your win!
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 7:14 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Michael's "Ode to a Friend" contest William. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 11:49 PM
Congrats William on your top ten victory with this excellent poetry for the contest ode to a friend luv..enjoy..
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July 25, 2011 at 10:26 PM
I really felt your expressions of betrayal, and relief at being freed from this 'friendship' congrats on your win and thanks for entering my first ever win~Michael
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July 25, 2011 at 10:27 PM
i meant to say 'thanks for entering my first ever CONTEST....
Ramage Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 10:19 PM
Sounds like you were deeply hurt. Sorry for your pain, however congratulations on your win. Lee
Mehta Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 9:38 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael,William
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 7:05 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today William. Love, Carol
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