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A French Kiss

“You are supposed to be loved up” The woman whispers to the man “You are supposed to be heartbroken” The man whispers back to the woman “We both come from different stages of relationships” “Mine is at the end and yours is a new partnership” “Where do we go from this?” The woman asked the man as they french kissed “We are at different stages of our relationships” “Mine is new and you have ended your partnership” “How do we move on from this?” The man asked the woman as they reminisce “What we are doing is wrong” The woman whispered like a birdsong “Enjoy our time together, but this has to end” The man did not want to offend The moral of this story is to be open and honest, not to pretend Be honest with your partner, who should be your best friend Love and hate are so close in reality Honesty is the path to being set free…. Finished in 2nd place in Love for movie screens sponsored by Silent One, 4/10/17

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Date: 10/5/2017 7:46:00 AM
Wonderful write and important lesson, Craig - well-done! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)
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Date: 10/4/2017 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations Craig on your win with this excellent poem.
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Craig Hawkins
Date: 10/5/2017 1:56:00 AM
thank you x
Date: 10/4/2017 1:27:00 PM
Craig, a great write, congratulations on your win !
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Craig Hawkins
Date: 10/4/2017 2:26:00 PM
Thanks very much for your comments x
Date: 10/4/2017 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Craig!
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Craig Hawkins
Date: 10/4/2017 2:26:00 PM
Thanks very much for your comments x
Date: 10/4/2017 6:58:00 AM
Great moral, always important to be open and honest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/29/2017 3:30:00 PM
- I can feel their love ... can not refuse - Openness and honesty are very important in a relationship - A lovely poem Craig, a pleasure to visit :) - Greetings and hugs from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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Craig Hawkins
Date: 10/2/2017 3:07:00 AM
Thanks for the comment...I wrote this from the heart and i'm glad you enjoyed....
Date: 9/28/2017 6:57:00 AM
Well said Craig! "Honesty is the path to being set free". Nice piece.
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Craig Hawkins
Date: 9/28/2017 7:01:00 AM
aww thanks for your comment...:-)

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