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A Freezing Cold Water Swim

(Sung To The Song "A Spoonful Of Sugar" By Julie Andrews...From the film..Mary Poppins)...(1964) A winters New Year's Day cold swim May seem irrational and grim And dress-up fun is...set! For that sea dip The goosebumps marinated skin Teeth fast chattering A grimace, the tingles, the constant shivering When.. a.. freezing cold water swim helps awaken the soul Awaken the soul-oul Awaken the soul When a freezing cold water swim helps awaken the soul In a most unusual way The rapid breathing and nose drips And the strange blueness of my lips My heart is now pumping extremely fast While in the sea so cold and grey Frozen eyes that won't obey And icicles...are new...extentions to my hair When a freezing cold water swim helps awaken the soul Awaken the soul-oul Awaken the soul When a freezing cold water swim helps awaken the soul In a most unusual way. Wishing my body was much fatter For protection and some warmth But then, I hear the others scream and cheer From each and every swimmer here Money for charities we hold dear We cheer and cheer The mon-ey raised Is very, very high Br-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-ahh When a freezing cold water swim helps awaken the soul Awaken the soul-oul Awaken the soul When a freezing cold water swim helps awakens the soul In a most unusual way. Contest - To The Tune Of Musicals Part One Poetry Contest Song - A Spoonful of Sugar from Mary Poppins Sponsor - Natasha L Scragg Written - 28.12.21

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Date: 2/7/2022 2:53:00 PM
Hello Emilia ... I'll hum along to your song and enjoy that, but no way will I take a dip in freezing water. Did it once but never again - thanks Emilia - Lindsay
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Date: 1/1/2022 4:17:00 AM
I love this Emilia….I was singing it away in my head! Cheers Debx
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Emilia James
Date: 1/1/2022 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Deb, I'm still singing it out loud. I pity the poor souls near me at the time lol. Emilia : )
Date: 12/29/2021 6:53:00 PM
Emilia,you must be crazy down your neck of the woods.it made me cold reading it.lol.but all for a good cause. Good luck in competition.take care.simon:-):-)
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Emilia James
Date: 12/31/2021 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Simon, I'm good with crazy, makes it less boring and more interesting lol. Emilia : )
Date: 12/29/2021 11:11:00 AM
I shall give you plenty of space . . . .
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Emilia James
Date: 12/31/2021 9:37:00 AM
Don't blame you Rico, Emilia : )

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