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A Free Bird Rising

I remember you Like a free bird rising on golden wings Glowing with the radiance of youth Not yet ready for womanhood But taking the leap anyway As if you knew what lay ahead And couldn't wait to go I remember You Blossoming all at once like Springtime Tossing your hair over one shoulder Defiant as love against the odds Even now these many years later after college and Vet Nam After marriage and fatherhood After all my pride and prejudice MY agonies and ecstasy's I remember you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/7/2013 6:40:00 PM
This is my kind of poetry.... Sweet, lovingly poignant and forever etched into the memory of the intended. Congratulations.... Jake
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Date: 7/7/2013 7:28:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Very expressive and emotive winning work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/6/2013 2:08:00 PM
this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat
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Date: 7/6/2013 10:40:00 AM
Michael, your poem glows with radiance inspiring bittersweet gentle emotion:) congrats on the win !
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Date: 7/6/2013 8:27:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Michael, very deserving of a win. I hope I'm not reading it incorrectly, but There is a melancholy mood that I appreciate. Congratulations... Jack
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Date: 7/5/2013 11:05:00 PM
captivating.... .... congratulations... from:Linda
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