A Frail Friend

Little did I know as I baked my afternoon cherry pie
That I would spy a tiny little mouse lazying around the window seal
He was tiny and gray peculiar I'd say.
I watched his nose dart swiftly in search of a meal. 

I was fascinated that such a tiny creature could run so fast
His legs carried him swiftly down the ledge and onto the ground
His little tail behind him flew past
I leaned over and heard a squeaky sound. 

I jarred the window open quickly and listened for the noise I had heard
I heard it not once but twice a little 'squeak squeak' then it went quite
I worried to myself as I baked my pie that the mouse would be lunch for a bird. 
I was scared he would become part of a large animals diet. 

I shut the window and returned to my pie
I wondered if I would see more of my visitor after I left him a snack 
I searched through the refrigerator practically playing I spy.
Aah Ha a treat for my friend, a good old piece of Colby Jack.


For: A short poem contest
By: Roxanna Johnson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Judy's contest Roxanna. Love,Carol
Buckeridge Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 6:58 AM
A sweet poem! Congratulations on your win x
Devonshire Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 10:21 AM
How sweet that you offered the mouse some cheese, Roxanna. Delightful poem! Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Lovely poem Roxanna.Congrats on your win....
Mehta Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of judy, Roxanna
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 8:19 PM
ahhh, being nice to a little mouse. Love that title frail friend. You are brave to not squeal upon seeing the mouse there in your house! Congratulations on your fine win. LUv, Andrea
Konos Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Thank you for being in my contest
Johnson Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 5:27 PM
Thanks(:
Sweetheart Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 4:12 PM
Congrats Roxanna on your great win in Short Poem contest with this terrific write and entry luv.. enjoy another sweet success...
Ronthorpe Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 3:00 PM
You had me at cherry pie....MMmmmm, Pie. Anyway, Extremely well written, very good. Congrats.
Johnson Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 5:25 AM
Thanks and your welcome(:
Gelb Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 6:44 PM
Cute poem. Thank's for reading mine.
Mehta Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Wonderful write full of humor , good luck in the contest, Roxanna
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