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A Fragrant Bed

asleep in a bloom on the lake of pearl moonbeams water lily dreams green frog in black night drifting in rock-a-bye dark where stars make their mark moonlight tiptoes soft on cool petals of the pink shadows indistinct colors mourn for hours at the lake of pearly dreams observing black themes
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Jones Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 12:43 AM
Beautiful imagery that makes my mind see a scent of loveliness!
Buehler Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 2:22 PM
I appreciate your kind thoughts so much Karen :)
DiMino Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Very beautiful imagery. Magical!
Buehler Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 9:12 PM
I'm so delighted! Thank you, my friend. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 2:42 AM
Your haikus are of a high standard. Such lovely imagery right through.
Buehler Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 9:10 PM
Your words of esteem are very nice to read. Deepest heartfelt thanks. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:24 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Pretty picture/flower for your little frog to take his nap. Be happy today as you write away.............
Buehler Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:20 PM
Your words are very nice to read, dear Paula. Deepest thanks. I hope your day is happy, too.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:44 AM
You’ve a way with words, dear one! A dreamer of dreams and black themes…asleep in a bloom - touches my soul! ahh…
Buehler Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:14 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I am happy that this poem touched you. Blessings and hugs.
Greenhough Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 9:23 AM
A beautiful poem. It rocks. Thank you for the nostalgia of nights beside a lake.
Buehler Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:12 PM
You're most welcome. Thank you for for your thrilling comments.
One Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Lovely wordplay and selection of words..
Buehler Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 4:54 PM
Thank you so much.
Pandit Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:24 AM
Every stanza a fabulous poem. Splendid images you convey, Evelyn. Much enjoyed the exuberance of your photo and your poem.
Buehler Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 4:54 PM
My heartfelt thanks to you, dear friend. It is a pleasure to read your uplifting remarks.
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:16 AM
- Beautiful, Evelyn :) - My fav. is the first ... adventurous dreams :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 4:48 PM
Deepest thanks, Anne-Lise. Your fave is such an honor. Blessings and hugs.
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