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A FRAGMENT OF MY FAMILY

I found it so difficult to write a poem about my biological mother I finally wrote “Oh, Mama”. It is a sad poem about daughter/mother relationship, like a crumpled picture or a torn picture separating me, being a fragmented piece of my family. Will I get an answer why she treated me so differently? No answer then. Never will be. 2/24/21 Emile Pinet Fragmented Verse Poetry Used: How Many Syllables

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Date: 3/4/2021 12:00:00 PM
Touching write Marilene. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Marilene Evans
Date: 3/4/2021 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Linda.
Date: 3/4/2021 8:44:00 AM
Hi Marilene, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your high podium win- Alexis
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Marilene Evans
Date: 3/4/2021 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. It was so nice of you.
Date: 3/4/2021 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations Marlene, Your poem came in "Second" in my contest, your sad thoughts on your relationship, (or lack thereof) with your mother, touched my heart and earned you a top podium position. Well done my friend, Emile.
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Marilene Evans
Date: 3/4/2021 4:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Emile. It is really heart breaking, not knowing. She died six weeks ago and her Memorial Service is next week.
Date: 2/26/2021 8:50:00 AM
Hi Marlene, What a moving write on sensitive subject. The dynamics of a family can be difficult at times. You expressed that well. Best wishes in the in the contest-Alexis
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Marilene Evans
Date: 2/26/2021 11:18:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis. Yes, never will be, she died a month ago.