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A Forgotten Man

One by one they left the nest Daughters and sons Their time at home done Let the old man rest They all started their lives In brand-new locales Called him once a week Vowed to stay pals But the calls became fewer They had jobs and kids too No time to reminisce Their lives were exciting and new He had his interests, they figured His own circle of friends So they forgot all about him Blatantly -- didn't even pretend To care that he missed them so much That all he asked for was to just keep in touch That he was pining away, becoming depressed A forgotten man, no longer blessed... So late in the evening of his final birthday Sitting by the phone, to hope and to pray He put a gun to his temple, for no one had called This forgotten man, for whom was felt nothing at all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/23/2018 6:00:00 PM
Yes, this is a very good poem and getting one thinking is a good thing :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/24/2018 9:50:00 AM
Agreed! Amen. … Happy Holidays, Heidi! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 12/23/2018 5:37:00 PM
absolutely heartbreaking Gershon, sadly families do drift apart but to think of someone being so alone they end their life is beyond sad, I will see my mum in her carehome (if I am over my cold) and I have my son home, I ask for nothing more:-) have a lovely time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/23/2018 5:47:00 PM
Thank you for your encouragement and support, Jan. Indeed, this was meant to be heartbreaking. Let us hope that our hearts remain whole in the year to come. Best always, Gershon
Date: 12/23/2018 3:06:00 PM
Heartbreaking poem, well written Gershon. It really makes people think. Merry Christmas :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/23/2018 5:46:00 PM
Here's hoping that thinking is a good thing! :) gw

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