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I travel to this forest as if in a trance, my journey begins here, my heart pulsates to the mellifluous koel cooing most melodious sonata, serenade me to a tranquil tangerine reverie. there are majestic tall trees, and there are shrubs and bushes... composed and demure, in the faraway forest of my starry effervescent dreams. with lavender yearnings the tall trees spread their branches, aspiring to reach the vermillion sky, shrubs and bushes, humbled and unnoticed, emanate saffron imagination sprinkling lilac dreams on my musing eyes. I smell the misty breeze rippling from birds’ wings, hear a chartreuse waterfalls falling on coral rocks, mystifying my existence. gentle strokes of raindrops create  a magical cadence of rhapsody, my dreams spread their wings in kaleidoscopic neon horizon... April 15, 2021 For "In The Forest Of My Dreams" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose "All Yours (April 23) Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand FIRST PLACE Your 2021 N-A Choice Premiere Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 8/6/2021 7:39:00 AM
Wow... This is so inspiring. Very beautiful.
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Date: 5/2/2021 7:26:00 AM
That's lovely.... Congratulations on your win
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/2/2021 8:09:00 AM
Thank you. Appreciate your reading my poem. BW ~ Mala
Date: 4/28/2021 8:45:00 PM
beautiful imagery , Malabika, with a soothing serenest. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/28/2021 2:16:00 PM
BIG congrats on your trophy win Mala. Wonderful imagery!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 3:09:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay. Appreciate your comments. BW ~ Mala
Date: 4/28/2021 11:47:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win with this beautiful writing. God bless you dear friend, Love, Gina
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 1:18:00 PM
Thank you, Regina. Feel fortunate to be in a community of talented poets. Love ~ Mala
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Regina. Feel fortunate to be in a community of talented poets. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/28/2021 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Wish I was walking down the path. Love you wonderful line, " my dreams spread their wings in kaleidoscopic neon horizon.." Have a blessed day.............
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 1:07:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Really appreciate.
Date: 4/28/2021 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Poet. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 4/28/2021 4:19:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... letting me bask with refreshing journey through your picturesque forest. God bless you.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thank you, Beata. Really appreciate your beautiful comments. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/28/2021 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations dear Mala for your TROPHY win with this splendid write!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 1:09:00 PM
Thanks JCB. Really appreciate your ongoing support. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/27/2021 10:34:00 PM
Your choice words balance creatively, Mala, much enjoyed, my gratitude for your participation and compliments for your win, Aloha!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 1:08:00 PM
Thanks, William. Your inspiring comments mean a lot to me. Really appreciate my placement in your contest. BW ~ Mala
Date: 4/24/2021 1:21:00 PM
Beautiful imagism! Must be a real forest somewhere! Very dreamlike! If it is for a contest, all the best!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/24/2021 2:30:00 PM
Thanks, Krish. There must be dream-like forests somewhere - we need to find it! Appreciate your beautiful comments. BW~ Mala
Date: 4/21/2021 10:43:00 PM
Dreamy tour to a nice forest. I am charmed. Love.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/22/2021 4:42:00 AM
Thanks, Anisha. I am glad you visited. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/18/2021 7:08:00 AM
Such a dreamy piece! Would love to indulge in that state , too. Just splendid !! Best wishes in the contest! More power.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/18/2021 8:02:00 PM
Thank you, dear JCB. Really appreciate your lovely words. Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 4/16/2021 1:03:00 PM
I like the forest of your dreams a whole lot better than the forests full of mosquitoes in Chicago during the summer months. Seriously, your forest is ethereal. Beautifully penned, Mala. :) Gershon
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/16/2021 1:06:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon. Yes, you are right. Probably the dream ones are better than the real ones. Appreciate your kind words, my friend. BW ~ Mala
Date: 4/16/2021 11:45:00 AM
Hello Mala, I felt like I was walking in the forest with you. Love Friendship Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/16/2021 3:12:00 PM
Hello Mala, I can picture us walking in this forest. the scerenery is beautiful. Love friendship Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/16/2021 12:57:00 PM
Hello My Friend, I am delighted that you enjoyed the poem. It would be so nice if we could walk in a forest together! Love Friendship ~ Mala
Date: 4/16/2021 11:25:00 AM
Beautiful, colourful imagery which appeals to our senses, Mala. The ending is super. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/16/2021 12:56:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. Your comments inspire me. BW ~ Mala
Date: 4/16/2021 6:48:00 AM
Mala, a beautiful dream, your poem creates a pleasing resonant melody.... Good Luck in the contest! Take Care, Paulette
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/16/2021 7:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paulette. I am so glad you read this poem - this is bit of an experiment with imagism. Really appreciate your wonderful comments. Love ~ Mala

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