A Forest and the Sea

wave and waiting shore
gulls sing with the oceans tune
rustling trees pitch in


7/1/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 3, 2015 at 9:26 PM
Lee, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Austin Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 11:27 AM
Beautiful scene. Would love to go there. Congrats, daver
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November 1, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Lee, congratulations on being featured this week with this wonderful Haiku full of imagery. I enjoyed reading~ Caryl
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July 31, 2015 at 11:17 PM
Hi Lee, awesome imagery. Now, I see you are so good with it... :) By the way April, I'm happy to meet you. More, excited to work with a new poet. I guarantee this is going to be fun. :) I sent you the collaboration, it's a done deal and I enjoyed working with you... LINDA
Ayala Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 5:18 PM
I have to learn to write great haiku like this one! Lovely! Kika
La France Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 8:38 AM
Lee, you have penned a beautiful haiku, a stunning 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, I love you
Mutindi Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 4:24 AM
...and how they complement each other...nice Haiku Lee, congrats!
Ward Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 2:55 AM
Congratulations on your win, Lee. Julia, :)
Wigley Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:38 PM
NOW you're cookin', Lee. Terrific piece of work. Very clever. Well done. Regards, Viv
Carter Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Thank you viv! I'm trying lol
A. Sharma Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Congrats on ur winning awesome haiku Lee!
Carter Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:51 PM
Thank you Dr.Upma : )
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 10:38 PM
this is a cute one!! Congrats on the win.
Carter Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 10:45 PM
Thank you Andrea : )
Leiser Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 9:21 PM
Congrats on your win, Lee! I love to hear the gulls at the ocean, and you captured the scene well with your haiku :)
Carter Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 10:00 PM
Thank you Laura : )
Roper Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 6:22 PM
Nice write, Lee , congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
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July 2, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Thank you Eve : )
Hamilton Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 6:16 PM
lovely Lee congrats on placing hugs
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July 2, 2015 at 7:33 PM
Thank you shadow : )
A  Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 5:58 PM
Lee, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Carter Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 7:33 PM
Thank you skat : )
Callus Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:31 AM
You make music with just three lines, Lee! Love the imagery. // paul
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July 2, 2015 at 11:47 AM
Thank you paul : )
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