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Inspired by the difficulty I had getting my son to put on shoes and socks when he was a little kid getting ready for school.

My son - no fun Distress to dress Thinks rocks in socks His view not true Won’t put one foot in shoes I choose and so we go to let him get new pair to wear. He tries each size. It seems he beams. Okay I say. Those shoes we’ll choose. But oh, the woe. Again - with pain to use new shoes! He tries and cries, then howls and scowls. This stuff- enough! Just please use these: Flip flops. Gripe stops! May 20, 2023 For A Brian Strand Premiere No 1218 Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/5/2023 5:11:00 AM
ha ha , always love your footles
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Date: 5/26/2023 1:23:00 AM
This is an excellent example of how Footles should be written, Andrea, and the Footle Story itself is so much fun :) Regards // paul
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Date: 5/24/2023 5:26:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Creative work for sure. Sara
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Date: 5/24/2023 3:37:00 AM
Andrea, a cute and creative collection.
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Date: 5/22/2023 11:33:00 AM
Just delightful Andrea. Love the way you strung the story together in a string of footles! You do these so well. I remember when out oldest would curl up his toes when putting on ski boots at age five! This delightful set of footles just makes me smile and remember!! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/21/2023 9:01:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. New shoes were a pain in the foot to get broken in. Aren't we glad there are athletic shoes today. Thanks for sharing this story and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 5/20/2023 8:41:00 PM
bad memories, with children are always the best, take care, yann
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Date: 5/20/2023 1:01:00 PM
so cleverly done, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 5/20/2023 11:49:00 AM
Again, I so enjoy your Footles, Andrea. Good luck in the contest, my friend. :-) Have a great weekend! Bill
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Date: 5/20/2023 7:53:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, You told a great story in the Google form. Thank goodness for flip-flops. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis
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Date: 5/20/2023 7:14:00 AM
I love it.
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Date: 5/20/2023 6:28:00 AM
Glad flip flops solved the shoe blues, Very nice Footle Andrea, beat wishes
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Date: 5/20/2023 1:17:00 AM
Quite a fun footle. Hope is more obedient.
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