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11/22/2025 for A Fly on the Wall Poetry Contest sponsored by Suzette Richards

A Fly on the Wall

The poet apologizes to Donovan

Thrown like a fly on the wall
It's sixty years since his last call
Who would have thought we would see 
The ending of democracy
When will the Hurdy Gurdy Man, come singing songs of love…

Not learning from histories past
Abdicating power fast
Self-rule is not certainty
Despots don’t serve humanity 
When will the Hurdy Gurdy Man, come singing songs of love…
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Miller Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:22 AM
Great poem David, congratulations
Crandall Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 5:53 PM
Thanks Terry - seasons greetings!
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December 13, 2025 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in this Fly on the Wall contest. Way to go. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 5:35 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Jones Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 5:14 AM
Congratulations David on your win!
Crandall Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 5:36 PM
Thanks, Karen!
Crandall Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 5:35 PM
Thanks, Karen!
Wolf Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 8:36 PM
What? It ended with Nixon. Remember? Soup mail, please. Thanks, gw
Crandall Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 6:22 PM
I remember Nixon. Hmm, I didn't think you were old enough to remember him. Well, there's history books of course.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 4:52 PM
wow, this is a brilliant take for the contest! Using the Hurdy Gurdy Man was creative. The last two lines say it all for me. Best wishes with this contest entry.
Crandall Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 6:21 PM
Thanks, I think just heard that song on Youtube!
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