Premiere Contest WinnerA fly on the wall

A fly on the wall sees nothing at all
apart from the dung on which it will crawl.
But people will say I wish I were so,
then they could know what others don’t know.
Stare at the grifters, the losers, the cheats
while sitting quite still and sucking some sweets.
For life on a wall that is not your own
is palpably simple, when mud’s to be thrown.
But now we’re ALL flies caught in the wide web,
watch twenty-four seven our chosen celeb.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Swan Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 2:17 AM
Indeed, aptly named 'web'. J :)
Miller Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 3:39 AM
Thank you Jeanette
Dietrich Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 3:08 PM
A really worthy trophy win. Congrats
Miller Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 3:40 AM
Thank you so much Andrea I appreciate your support
Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in this Fly on the Wall contest. Way to go. Sara K
Miller Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:14 AM
Thank you Sara
Jones Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 5:11 AM
Congratulations Terry on your top win with this creative write!
Miller Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:15 AM
Thank you Karen
Kitchin Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 4:21 AM
Terry, clever and creative and so true. Congratulations on your trophy win.
Miller Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:15 AM
Thank you Tania really appreciate your comments
Volumes Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 4:13 AM
So relatable, and so humorous. A perfect take for this topic. well done and well deserved win.
Miller Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Thank you Wen, appreciate your comments, I hope you are well?
Richards Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 2:45 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Terry, with this contemporary and relatable poem as it nails the idiom of ‘a fly on the wall’. The fly is an unnoticed observer, it sees too much, and its demise becomes the satire. It’s fun, but also biting.
Miller Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:17 AM
Sorry for the late response we have been in Paris for ten days, Thank you so much for the placement, kind comments and for running this interesting contest
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Very good one, Terry. Clever. I hope it gets a win
Miller Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:17 AM
Thank you Andrea
Goldsmith Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 9:50 AM
What a creative write you have here. Great Ending... I enjoyed reading. Have a fun day/weekend writing away..........
Miller Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:17 AM
Thank you Paula
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