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A Flower With Wings

a red-winged blackbird quiescent as a flower until he's riled up the breeze of his wings majestic, dictorial tourist nudged onward depressed cone flower with heaviness of his form far above the nest the sentry's hawk-eyes sharp and alert to movement in city's garden meanwhile the gal shares her snapshot and story over and over the beauty and rage of this handsome specimen illuminated 3/8/2019

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Date: 3/9/2019 11:52:00 PM
surely, a majestic avian scene worth imprinting on the mind, in one's heart,kim... huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2019 9:06:00 AM
Thanks, Nette! :)
Date: 3/9/2019 3:00:00 PM
I am seeing more robins and bluebirds, you are right, they are flowers with wings, so beautifully put!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2019 5:00:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! :)
Date: 3/9/2019 12:36:00 PM
Most birds inspire us to write - colours are sometimes unbelievable - what a perfect world God gave us! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2019 4:59:00 PM
You’re right! So many beauties! Hugs to you...Kim
Date: 3/9/2019 6:32:00 AM
We can be transported by momentary beauty , gardens, birds, humans, well written Kim, have a wonderful inspired day, xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2019 6:40:00 AM
Thank you, Pixie! I will never forget the experience!
Date: 3/8/2019 7:50:00 PM
love the imagery of him as a flower with wings! Imaginative and cute, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)

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