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A Flower and a Pot

A flower and a pot One always admires the flower But forgets the pot A son and a family One always admires the son But forgets the family A man and the nature One always admires The man's creations But forgets The nature's beauty

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/10/2021 8:17:00 PM

Sai, your poem is thought-provoking and beautiful. Indeed, mankind is very self-centered and forgets that he is a part of Nature, not apart from Her. I think man has lost the perspective that he is but a small speck in the grand eternal universe. Splendid poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 10/11/2021 12:28:00 AM

Thank you. Your comment is encouraging and I am looking forward to improve some more.

Frances Schiavina

Date: 7/13/2021 8:24:00 AM

Very beautifully said! We admire man's creations and forget the Creator of man.

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 7/18/2021 11:50:00 PM

Thank you.

Joanna Feltham

Date: 6/24/2021 2:07:00 PM

I really enjoyed your poem. In particular the first three lines. You nailed it right there. Have a lovely day.

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 6/24/2021 8:51:00 PM

Thank you.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/21/2021 8:52:00 AM

Nature is a many sided beast, but a very good looking one. Nicely written

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 6/24/2021 8:53:00 PM

Thank you.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/20/2021 9:57:00 PM

everyone praises others to enjoy but out of time everyone forgets the before one; it's true that in the end nature remains beautiful to beautify everyone

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 6/21/2021 4:56:00 AM

Thank you. I agree with you, nature is somewhat eternal, it remains beautiful even if the man is gone.