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A Flip Flop

A Flip Flop Shuffling through the dandelions, Partly hidden in the grass I find, A little flip flop too soon worn, Rushing spring, and all its signs. A tiny girl playing hide and seek, A doll under one arm, I saw her run, Little feet got cold, even numb, Oblivious, she was having fun. I take the flip flop to her house, Her mother thanking me so, I hear a cough, see a wet dress hanging, Little girl has her first spring cold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/8/2018 7:50:00 AM
This is definetly a sweet and caring poem. Well done Sunlite :)
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Date: 2/5/2018 12:02:00 PM
Such a sweet piece filled with youthful energy and creating a desire for spring.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 2/5/2018 6:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard.
Date: 2/4/2018 1:04:00 AM
Delightful imagery. Wonderful, Sunlite.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 2/5/2018 6:07:00 PM
I appreciate your comments!
Date: 2/3/2018 5:55:00 PM
A sweet and moving poem Sunlite with great imagery and emotion. Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 2/5/2018 6:08:00 PM
You are a dear, Susan.
Date: 2/3/2018 5:06:00 PM
Great storytelling Sunlite..
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 2/5/2018 6:08:00 PM
Thank you!!!!!
Date: 2/3/2018 2:00:00 PM
Touching story of youngsters which always have my heart and mind...Great topic, great setting, fine poem.
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Date: 2/3/2018 12:12:00 PM
- Spring cold is sad ... the most beautiful time of the year - A lovely poem, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 2/5/2018 6:10:00 PM
Spring colds are all to frequent! Thank you for reading and comment, Sunshine.

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