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A Fleeting Moment of Silence

What is it like? I don’t remember. It has been a long time A moment of quietly being alone No little kids voices screaming for a hot dog The phone doesn’t ring Music playing on a stereo in the next room Mozart filling the empty space Notes and chords Reeds, brass and percussion Playing a symphony of relaxing tones But not a single word to be heard Could this moment ever really exist? Maybe in today’s world it is merely a fantasy There will always be a child An annoying phone call Something…anything That will disrupt the quiet I am searching for In my dreams I may finally find it A world of total quiet, total relaxation No screaming kids No phone calls The only cursed interruption When the sun rises That damn bell rings The little kids yell The phone rings And the real world starts all over again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/3/2009 6:39:00 AM
Amazing. flows very smoothly and really draws the reader in to your world. I picture a man who dove head first into this swimming pool a long time ago and still hasn't come up for air. I haven't made that leap yet myself...I doubt my experience, or anyone's for that matter, would be any different. Thanks for writing. -Yoni
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Date: 8/29/2009 2:38:00 PM
Finding the moment of silence,before i sleep is best:)well penned--charma
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Date: 8/28/2009 6:53:00 PM
At least you won't HEAR this comment. It is the real world as parents know it. As Deb said, you will wish the phone would ring. Nice one! BG
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Date: 8/28/2009 5:10:00 PM
I hear ya LOL or not read Silent Guises. They will grow up and you will LONG for the sound of them. Light & Love
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:36:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Robert. Thank you for sharing.Shhhhhh. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2009 3:47:00 PM
I think we can all identify with this well written sign of the times......what a precious commodity it is to have peace and quiet in this day of hectic living!! Well done! ~ Carrie
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