Melani Udaeta Poet Triolet

A Flawless Cut

Press a stain on my garnet lips,
polish rough to a flawless cut;
Cover my soft sigh in rose hips,
press a stain on my garnet lips;
Our bodies caress and eclipse,
fireworks and comets the gamut;
Press a stain on my garnet lips, 
polish rough to a flawless cut.

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Mahtab Bangalee January 14, 2025 at 9:58 PM beautiful triolet shared, nice to read. congrats on potd Melani Udaeta January 15, 2025 at 5:15 PM Thank you!

Daniel Henry Rodgers January 14, 2025 at 11:01 AM Dear Melani, what a sensual and elegant poem, with its rhythmic flow and beautiful imagery. I love the the theme of transformation and passion. Congrats on POTD. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Melani Udaeta January 14, 2025 at 8:11 PM Thank you!!

Paula Goldsmith January 13, 2025 at 9:32 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a very blessed day/week................ Melani Udaeta January 13, 2025 at 9:37 AM Thank you! Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues January 13, 2025 at 8:09 AM Sensual and emotive! Congrats on POTD!

Gershon Wolf January 11, 2025 at 4:44 PM Very nice lines in the triolet format! Congrats on POTD. ~ Gershon Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 5:21 PM Thank you!!

Paige Hind January 11, 2025 at 2:22 PM Very romantic poem - congrats on POTD, had a sense of magic to it

Brandy Nicole January 11, 2025 at 1:45 PM So beautifully expressed and presented. Soft and tender, yet sweet and sensual. Congratulations Melani, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 1:48 PM Thank you so much. Blessings

Tania Kitchin January 11, 2025 at 11:45 AM Melani, congratulations on POTD. Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 12:18 PM Thank you.

Terrell Martin January 11, 2025 at 11:36 AM An interesting and intriguing piece of romantic poetry. Congratulations on POTD! Warm wishes, Terrell Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 12:17 PM Thank you.

Hilda Greenhough January 11, 2025 at 9:44 AM I enjoy this lovely triolet. It is a smooth, intriguing rhyme. Congratulations on POTD. Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 10:28 AM Thank you!

Ink Empress January 11, 2025 at 7:50 AM Its so good to see your take on garnet lips get featured here. Beautiful as always dear poetic soul! Such a romantic and descriptive take, so well articulated! Congratulations on receiving POTD! Well deserved! Sending you light always. Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 8:20 AM Thank you!!! It’s my birthstone. I’m posting it on Instagram today. Thanks for the inspiration!

Vilmos Zoltan Galyo January 11, 2025 at 6:47 AM Excellent! Brilliant! Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 8:20 AM Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2025 at 6:00 AM - Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Melani :) - hugs Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 8:20 AM Thank you!

Karen Jones January 11, 2025 at 3:46 AM Impressed by your execution of this form! I am in comparison very limited! Congratulations on potd! Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 8:20 AM Thank you!

Unseeking Seeker January 11, 2025 at 3:07 AM A superb Triolet, it reads so well. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Melani Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 3:34 AM Thank you!

Beryl Edmonds January 11, 2025 at 1:20 AM Congratulations Melani, on receiving poem of the day with your sensuous Triolet “A Flawless Cut”…… Beryl Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 3:35 AM Thank you!

Tom Cunningham January 11, 2025 at 12:33 AM Quite a passionate verse Melanie, congrats to you on today's POTD honour. Tom Melani Udaeta January 11, 2025 at 3:35 AM Thank you!