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A Flawless Cut

Press a stain on my garnet lips,
polish rough to a flawless cut;
Cover my soft sigh in rose hips,
press a stain on my garnet lips;
Our bodies caress and eclipse,
fireworks and comets the gamut;
Press a stain on my garnet lips, 
polish rough to a flawless cut.

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/14/2025 9:58:00 PM

beautiful triolet shared, nice to read. congrats on potd

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/15/2025 5:15:00 PM

Thank you!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/14/2025 11:01:00 AM

Dear Melani, what a sensual and elegant poem, with its rhythmic flow and beautiful imagery. I love the the theme of transformation and passion. Congrats on POTD. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/14/2025 8:11:00 PM

Thank you!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/13/2025 9:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a very blessed day/week................

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/13/2025 9:37:00 AM

Thank you! Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/13/2025 8:09:00 AM

Sensual and emotive! Congrats on POTD!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/11/2025 4:44:00 PM

Very nice lines in the triolet format! Congrats on POTD. ~ Gershon

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/11/2025 5:21:00 PM

Thank you!!

Paige Hind

Date: 1/11/2025 2:22:00 PM

Very romantic poem - congrats on POTD, had a sense of magic to it

Tom Woody

Date: 1/11/2025 1:52:00 PM

Sexy triolet melani. Enjoy your time in the spotlight

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/11/2025 2:11:00 PM

Thank you! Be blessed.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/11/2025 1:45:00 PM

So beautifully expressed and presented. Soft and tender, yet sweet and sensual. Congratulations Melani, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/11/2025 1:48:00 PM

Thank you so much. Blessings

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/11/2025 11:45:00 AM

Melani, congratulations on POTD.

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/11/2025 12:18:00 PM

Thank you.

Terrell Martin

Date: 1/11/2025 11:36:00 AM

An interesting and intriguing piece of romantic poetry. Congratulations on POTD! Warm wishes, Terrell

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/11/2025 12:17:00 PM

Thank you.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/11/2025 9:44:00 AM

I enjoy this lovely triolet. It is a smooth, intriguing rhyme. Congratulations on POTD.

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/11/2025 10:28:00 AM

Thank you!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/11/2025 7:50:00 AM

Its so good to see your take on garnet lips get featured here. Beautiful as always dear poetic soul! Such a romantic and descriptive take, so well articulated! Congratulations on receiving POTD! Well deserved! Sending you light always.

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/11/2025 8:20:00 AM

Thank you!!! It’s my birthstone. I’m posting it on Instagram today. Thanks for the inspiration!